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【OG20-P786-764题】

While Noble Sissle may be best known for his collaboration with Eubie Blake, as both a vaudeville performer and as a lyricist for songs and Broadway musicals, also enjoying an independent career as a singer with such groups as Hahn’s Jubilee Singers.

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and as a lyricist for songs and Broadway musicals, also enjoying
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and writing lyrics for songs and Broadway musicals, also enjoying
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and a lyricist for songs and Broadway musicals, he also enjoyed
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as well as writing lyrics for songs and Broadway musicals, he also enjoyed
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as well as a lyricist for songs and Broadway musicals, he had also enjoyed
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当前版本由 kisenana 更新于2015-11-24 10:39:45 感谢由 kisenana 对此题目的解答所做出的贡献。

选项A both （a vaudeville performer） and（ as a lyricist ）括号里面不平行；句子结构不完整，没有谓语

选项B 错误同A

选项C 正确，句子主干：he also enjoyed an independent career as a singer 。

选项D as well as 错误；

选项E 错误同D； had enjoyed时态错误

当前版本由吃着香蕉开跑车更新于2021-04-13 15:49:03 感谢由吃着香蕉开跑车对此题目的解答所做出的贡献。

题干想要表达的意思是也许Noble Sissle最知名的还是和Eubie Blakea的合作，Noble Sissle既是一位杂耍演员，也是一位歌曲及百老汇音乐的作曲人，他也非常享受歌手这样一个事业，享受有像Hahn’s Jubilee等歌手这样的团队。
首先，根据both...and平行结构排除D,E
A.	无主句，排除，且as部分我们讲就近修饰的话是指Eubie Blakea，而实际要表达的是Noble Sissle,所以会有歧义。
B.	Both...and 部分不平行，排除。另外，无主句，排除。
C.	正确both and 内容平行，且有主句，he也有明确指代是Noble Sissle,正确。

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孩子有学上啦

as well as 是可以替代and连同的，词典有解释，D的问题是writing 不平行，E是时态，错误不在as well as

0 0 回复 2021-11-17 10:20:19
JackMousa回复孩子有学上啦

OG对DE的原话是the version's use of both X as well as Y instead of both X and Y is incorrect

0 0 回复 2022-02-19 10:21:37
孩子有学上啦

平行

0 0 回复 2021-11-17 10:19:49
年笺

as well as 是可以替代and连同的，词典有解释，D的问题是writing 不平行，E是时态，错误不在as well as

0 0 回复 2021-10-21 10:23:59
孩子有学上啦回复年笺

是的

0 0 回复 2021-11-17 10:20:05
朋友醒醒

平行

0 0 回复 2021-09-13 10:34:33
iu

A both…and as 不平行 B both a…and writing 不平行 C 正确 DE both…as well as错误

0 0 回复 2020-05-07 15:59:29
夜空中最亮的星啦

ab缺主语

0 0 回复 2020-01-02 17:41:23
rainbow哇回复夜空中最亮的星啦

一

0 0 回复 2021-12-10 16:08:18
dGee

AB：首先肯定不对，选了他两，句子结构都不完整了，缺主句 DE：不能用as well as，这里考察both...and...平行

0 0 回复 2019-09-09 14:38:25
温柔暖暖的海风回复dGee

句子结构不对

0 0 回复 2020-09-02 15:02:13
Genius

as well as 主次之分前主后次 and 两者并列无主次之分

0 0 回复 2019-02-28 21:06:16
吃你家大米啦

（题外话）为什么时间短的是在危险区啊

0 0 回复 2018-09-06 10:26:47
yejinsui

后面是enjoyed 是过去时态为什么前面不是might be呢？

0 0 回复 2018-06-15 11:20:01
MoHelen回复yejinsui

前面是一直到现在都是为人所知的，是现在时没问题

0 0 回复 2019-09-19 15:07:45