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【OG20-P787-771题】

Although Alice Walker published a number of essays, poetry collections, and stories during the 1970s, her third novel, The Color Purple, which was published in 1982, brought her the widest acclaim in that it won both the National Book Award as well as the Pulitzer Prize.

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which was published in 1982, brought her the widest acclaim in that it won both the National Book Award as well as the Pulitzer Prize
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published in 1982, bringing her the widest acclaim by winning both the National Book Award and the Pulitzer Prize
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published in 1982, brought her the widest acclaim, winning both the National Book Award and the Pulitzer Prize
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was published in 1982 and which, winning both the National Book Award and the Pulitzer Prize, brought her the widest acclaim
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was published in 1982, winning both the National Book Award as well as the Pulitzer Prize, and bringing her the widest acclaim
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当前版本由吃着香蕉开跑车更新于2021-04-14 15:54:16 感谢由吃着香蕉开跑车对此题目的解答所做出的贡献。

A.原句逻辑意思没问题，意思是虽然AW出版了很多文章，但他的第三部小说给她带来了广泛称赞。In that 不优选这里不是因果关系，both and固定搭配。
B，主句无谓语动词，排除。By改变原文逻辑。
C，正确
D，Which brought无平行对象，且将原句的主干谓语成分变为修饰，逻辑变。Both ..and 固定搭配
E，语义重心不对：虽然AW出版了很多文章但她的第三部小说出版于1982。winning状语逻辑不对，both..and不平行。

当前版本由 MagicDave 更新于2021-10-25 09:36:47 感谢由 MagicDave 对此题目的解答所做出的贡献。

A in that这个搭配，gmat早就不用了
B 根据句意判断，published in 1992是做定语插入语， 即整句话无实意动词，fragment
D and which这个结构错误
E both as well as and，搭配混乱

C选项correct“，done” 结构修饰novel，
这道题的 published in 1982 和 which was published in 1982 都是做定语插入语，都是用过去分词修饰novel，两者都可以用。
考点在于逻辑，即winning both the National Book Award and the Pulitzer Prize到底是修饰谁的，答案是修饰brought her the widest acclaim这件事的。 小说的发表为她带来了认可，同时为她赢得了两个奖项。 
“，+doing ”这个结构即表示对前面一句话的修饰，又有和主句动作同时发生的意思，

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冲他丫的

ABE可以排重点在brought。。。 D and which brought不对

0 0 回复 2021-10-25 21:52:09
朋友醒醒

In that 不优选这里不是因果关系

0 0 回复 2021-09-13 12:47:38
1485405wibx

有人知道C项winning修饰的是什么吗，不是应该修饰那本书吗，那不是应该要靠近被修饰的东西吗

0 0 回复 2021-04-09 10:58:25
VickyT

为什么书不是was published？

0 0 回复 2021-02-15 23:25:17
218530ck回复VickyT

published，接的是the colour purple，补充这个的，不是主句成分

0 0 回复 2021-08-07 18:16:14
iu

A both…as well as错误 B 缺谓语 C 正确 D which修饰and错误 E both…as well as错误

0 0 回复 2020-05-07 16:54:16
园园爱吃肉

我的思路：逻辑语义，改变主干和修饰关系的句子秒排，D,E排。A both as well as用法不如both and好，in that有因果关系而且用法比较正式，不推荐选；B句子结构不完整缺谓语；C完美，winning修饰就近动作brought。AC对比择优选C

1 0 回复 2019-12-12 14:04:19
小颜回复园园爱吃肉

A选项both和as well as不平行，可以直接排

0 0 回复 2021-03-31 13:16:29
1469728dkohf

and which 到底出错在哪里？

0 0 回复 2019-11-17 10:18:33
；svkdnvl回复1469728dkohf

不平行，前面没从句

0 0 回复 2019-11-21 11:04:13

娜娜酱回复1469728dkohf

主句与从句不能并列

0 0 回复 2020-11-19 22:24:11
dGee

A:in that错，both 共用as well as 错 B：缺谓语 C：对 D：and which后面有问题 E：缺谓语

0 0 回复 2019-09-09 15:33:12
701789sn回复dGee

E选项不缺谓语 both as well as 的搭配错误

0 0 回复 2019-09-30 07:29:36
嘉仓佑措

B的原因，一是把修饰变成了主干，二是句意不对：书自己主动出版了，还自己凭借得奖而声名大噪。

0 0 回复 2019-04-11 02:07:53
MagicDave

A in that这个搭配，gmat早就不用了
B 根据句意判断，published in 1992是做定语插入语，即整句话无实意动词，fragment
D and which这个结构错误
E both as well as and，搭配混乱

C选项correct“，done” 结构修饰novel，
这道题的 published in 1982 和 which was published in 1982 都是做定语插入语，都是用过去分词修饰novel，两者都可以用。
考点在于逻辑，即winning both the National Book Award and the Pulitzer Prize到底是修饰谁的，答案是修饰brought her the widest acclaim这件事的。小说的发表为她带来了认可，同时为她赢得了两个奖项。
“，+doing ”这个结构即表示对前面一句话的修饰，又有和主句动作同时发生的意思，

0 0 回复 2018-01-30 10:35:59
Jade7777回复MagicDave

in that 一定是错误的吗不可以表示因为吗？

0 0 回复 2019-07-12 20:37:47

956794jnjtw回复 Jade7777

我也想知道

0 0 回复 2021-04-11 15:07:35