【OG20-P813-900题】As criminal activity on the Internet becomes more _OG17新题

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【OG20-P813-900题】

As criminal activity on the Internet becomes more and more sophisticated, not only are thieves able to divert cash from company bank accounts, they can also pilfer valuable information such as business development strategies, ne w product specifications, and contract bidding plans, and sell the data to competitors.

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they can also pilfer valuable information such as business development strategies, new product specifications, and contract bidding plans, and sell
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they can also pilfer valuable information that includes business development strategies, new product specifications, and contract bidding plans, and selling
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also pilfering valuable information including business development strategies, new product specifications, and contract bidding plans, selling
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but also pilfer valuable information such as business development strategies, new product specifications, and contract bidding plans to sell
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but also pilfering valuable information such as business development strategies, new product specifications, and contract bidding plans and selling
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A 正确

B AND前后不平行

C NOT ONLY BUT ALSO 不平行

D SUCH AS后面三个不平行

E AND CONTRACT 和AND SELLING不平行

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1289311ww

CDE一眼看到的问题就是没有主语啊前面是not only，but also 后面都要接完整的句子

0 0 回复 2019-12-28 15:07:22
园园爱吃肉

BCE是因为句子结构不完整排出的，D乍一看没有问题，至少从平行角度来说是没有错误的，但是后面把原本和pilfer并列的动作sell换成了to sell，改变了原句逻辑，所以错。（时刻记住effective communication！！）

1 0 回复 2019-12-14 13:50:38
462598pk

not only are 倒装 A. thieves are not only able to ......., they can also pilfer.... and sell......

0 0 回复 2019-10-28 12:02:47
Zhazha

D 选项： now we really do have a “not only… but also” structure, which means that we need to think about parallelism again. There’s not much wiggle-room here: whatever follows “not only” needs to be parallel to whatever follows “but also.” So we have: “not only are thieves able to divert cash… but also pilfer valuable information…” This isn’t awful, but it doesn’t quite seem parallel to me: “not only are thieves” gives us a subject and a verb, but the “but also” is followed only by a verb. Plus, “to sell” seems to only modify “contract bidding plans”, and that’s not quite right: the thieves are selling the strategies and specifications, too. (A) makes much more sense than (D).

1 0 回复 2019-09-03 16:22:32
你真幸运回复Zhazha

请问你你这个是在哪里看的呀，是RON神吗

0 0 回复 2019-09-14 10:23:59
Scopio_

D为什么不能是他们pilfer valuable information （such as balabala） to sell 呢？这样举例的名词是平行的啊

0 0 回复 2019-08-11 15:40:24
yvette回复Scopio_

D没有主语 not only...but also ...前后不平行了

0 0 回复 2019-08-18 20:00:13

yvette回复Scopio_

说错了应该是pilfer and ...to sell 不对称，排除。

0 0 回复 2019-08-18 20:02:09
LeonYu

D 谁能说清楚，肯定不是没主语的原因。

0 0 回复 2019-07-15 07:51:20
黑猫警长回复LeonYu

个人意见：such as business development strategies, new product specifications, and contract bidding plans to sell 这里并列的成分是 business development strategies， new product specifications和contract bidding plans to sell ，并列的了 noun, noun, and noun to do. 不正确，题目想要并列的是noun, noun, and noun. A答案就是它的修改版本

1 0 回复 2019-08-02 16:19:21

328042pjf回复LeonYu

pilfer和sell并列

0 0 回复 2019-08-18 14:09:07

小馄吞回复LeonYu

og的解释就是没有主语

0 0 回复 2019-10-13 21:04:14
Sinan800

当not only but also连接两个句子的时候，but可以省略，并且如果not only 放在句首表强调时，第一分句要倒装。当前面not only部分倒装是，后面部分一定是跟一个句子如：thay can also或者but it also

0 0 回复 2019-04-30 11:31:33

tinawestlife

本题比较难。很多考生一看到未划线部分有一个not only，然后立刻就在选项中找but also。实际上，not only…but also…确实是一个习惯表达，但是并不是唯一正确的习惯表达。可以用not only…but…，也可以用not only…also…。

选项分析：

A选项：Correct. 本选项在语法和逻辑上均是正确的。

B选项：and身后的selling the data to competitors是一个分词短语，该分词短语在and身前并没有平行对象。

C选项：pilfering valuable information是分词短语。句型not only…but also…中，not only和but also必须各自引导一个完整的句子，需要有完整的主谓结构。（当然，not only…but also…和and做连词是一个道理，也可以因为省略现象而只连接两个功能相同的部分。本题中的not only身后就是一个完整句，所以but also身后也必须是完整句）

D选项：句型not only…but also…中，not only和but also必须各自引导一个完整的句子，本选项的but also身后缺少主语。

E选项：pilfering valuable information是分词短语错误同(C)。

0 回复 2019-02-19 07:06:56

小馄吞回复tinawestlife

句型not only…but also…中，not only和but also必须各自引导一个完整的句子不对吧，如果是把not only…but also…共同的主语放在not only前的话，but also就可以不要主语

0 0 回复 2019-10-13 21:02:42

Barbeloo

修饰成分和修饰对象不能离太远

0 0 回复 2019-01-30 12:12:40
Oceanne

D选项such as后面哪里不平行啊，不是和正确答案的一样吗。
我觉得是D把原局的平行结构and去掉了一个，就改变了句子逻辑吧

0 0 回复 2019-01-08 03:22:39