雷哥网GMAT-【OG20-P809-882题】With the patience of its customers and with its ne_OG18新题

雷哥网GMAT>题库>OG18新题>句子改错SC >15407

句子改错SC-15407 【难度:650-680】 Time Cost00:00

报告题目错误

请选择错误类型：

请描述一下这个错误：

取消

建议使用官方纸质指南，查看对照完整题目

【OG20-P809-882题】

With the patience of its customers and with its network strained to the breaking point, the on-line service company announced a series of new initiatives trying to relieve the congestion that has led to at least four class-action lawsuits and thousands of complaints from frustrated customers.

A

the patience of its customers and with its network strained to the breaking point, the on-line service company announced a series of new initiatives trying to relieve
分析A选项
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

B

the patience of its customers and its network strained to the breaking point,the on-line service company announced a series of new initiatives that try to relieve
分析B选项
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

C

its network and the patience of its customers strained to the breaking point, the on-line service company announced a series of new initiatives to try to relieve
分析C选项
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

D

its network and with the patience of its customers strained to the breaking point, the on-line service company announced a series of initiatives to try relieving
分析D选项
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

E

its network and its customers' patience strained to the breaking point, the on-line service company announced a series of new initiatives to try relieving
分析E选项
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

该题平均耗时：3m9s ，平均正确率：57.9%。该题由网友8LsinKkR提供。更多GMAT题目请

网友解析

暂无雷哥网文字解析

预约讲师一对一题目解析课程

当前版本由吃着香蕉开跑车更新于2021-05-21 16:11:26 感谢由吃着香蕉开跑车对此题目的解答所做出的贡献。

选C
AD选项，With the patience of its customers and with its network strained to the breaking point，and前面的with结构语义不完整，原句要表达的意思应该是，因为客户的耐心和网络都已经到了崩溃的边缘，网络公司宣布了一系列新政策去缓解...，不需要中间再来个with把语义隔开。
B选项是前面平行的语义问题the patience （of its customers and its network修饰部分）network是不会有耐心的。
C选项，正确，独立主格 With （its network and the patience of its customers逻辑主语） strained to the breaking point逻辑谓语。
try to do 的意思是努力去做某事，侧重于为了达到目的而努力。
try doing 只是一种新的尝试，不带目的性，成不成功无所谓。
根据语义这里需要的是try to do的语义。

题目讨论（10条评论）

提交

1036912wrbwm

A待定(但 strained 单独修饰network 不优) with.../with... strained B initiatives that try to 好像try是in的自我本身特性，错语义是采取措施去达到xx目标应该是initiative to try D 同A E customers' patience不是优选结构，the patience of its customers优于customers' patience try to do 优于 try doing 补充:B- OF 后面A and B 有歧义，是只of A 还是of A and B ？

1 0 回复 2020-11-30 23:08:22
175029gvqit

再说一次，不要用try来排 A with错 B new initiatives that try to ，try的主语错 D with错 E 在有the patience of its customers下its customers' patience不佳

6 1 回复 2020-09-26 22:06:18

牛牛会牛

A、根据句意可知“the patience of its customers”并不是online service company announced a series of new initiative的背景，而应该是patience of its customers strained to the breaking point
B、可以理解为the patience和its network构成复合名词，也可以理解为customers和network构成复合名词，有歧义，错误（C选项将network放到前面即可以消除歧义；that作为noun modifier就近修饰initiative，表意为initiative本身可以relieve the congestion，逻辑意思错误
C、正确（network和patience用and连接后变成复合名词，作为一个整体被strained修饰）
D、根据句意可知“network”并不是online service company announced a series of new initiative的背景，而应该是network strained to the breaking point；try doing习语错误（正确的习语应该是try to do）
E、try doing习语错误（正确的习语应该是try to do）

0 回复 2020-09-22 16:18:30

Jennie在学习

前几个解析都有问题吧，应该是patience strained to the breaking point

0 0 回复 2020-09-17 20:45:50
Jennie在学习回复 Jennie在学习

光速打脸，看了一下OG解析，network和patience 都是strained...后面的朋友们希望不要被误导了

2 0 回复 2020-09-17 20:53:14
septcam

Dustin: try to尝试做某事，不一定会成功 try doing试了会成功

0 0 回复 2020-08-01 15:11:04
571661zxzq

a。一个点错在trying修饰了initiatives

0 0 回复 2020-07-23 11:14:30

小鱼儿yyy

to try to do something = to put in an effort to do something you already know can be successful / "I want to try to learn the piano this year."
try doing something = to do something as an experiment; you're not sure it will be successful / "Try adding more salt to your cookie batter."
With its network and the patience of its customers = more preferable
With the patience of its customers and its network = less preferable
In choice (B), the parallelism is between its customers and its network, implying that the customers and the network have patience. The latter is illogical.
Answers (D) and (E) also convey an inappropriate meaning. You might decide to try hang-gliding on your next vacation, but you wouldn’t decide to try getting a good score on the GMAT. Rather, you would decide to try to get a good score. The latter scenario indicates intent: you do something in order to try to get to a certain result. In that scenario, use try + infinitive. Eliminate choices (D) and (E) for faulty meaning.

0 回复 2019-12-29 13:52:54

923235eyto

new和initiative没有重复吗，后者不就是新方案的意思吗

0 0 回复 2019-12-16 23:21:39
923235eyto回复923235eyto

解决了The phrase in blue is not redundant. One definition of initiative is an action intended to solve a problem. Thus: new initiatives = new actions intended to solve a problem.

1 0 回复 2019-12-16 23:25:57
dGee

这里用try to表目的，排除DE 根据逻辑，只能顾客的耐心到了极致，不能是network，排除AB

0 0 回复 2019-09-01 20:53:45
柯柯g750回复dGee

辟谣，第二句话不对

1 0 回复 2020-04-18 00:26:20
夏夏夏筱染

ry to do sth.设法做某事； try doing sth.试图做某事；区别是：try to do侧重努力，为了达到目的而努力。 try doing 只是一种新的尝试，不带明显的目的性。

0 0 回复 2019-08-28 23:28:51
柯柯g750回复夏夏夏筱染

chasedream上有更清楚的解释，你的解释太玄学了

0 0 回复 2020-04-18 00:27:26