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【OG20-P799-833题】
The Eastern State Penitentiary was established in 1822 by reformers advocating that prisoners be held in solitary confinement and hard labor so as to reform them .
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选C
考点:句法结构+修饰
难度:600-650
解析:
主干是The ESP was established .. by reformers advocating that prisoners be held in solitary confinement and hard labor so as to reform them.逻辑是监狱在1822年由改革者们建立,改革者主张把将囚犯单独监禁和劳役去改革他们。原文advocating that,后面强调的是主张的内容和既定事实,主张的是犯人被单独监禁和劳役为了去改变他们,逻辑有误,这里应该就直接点名主张的两种方式,不用that。So as to放一起表示为了,有in order to的含义
B项定从who修饰人,逻辑重心变。
C项正确,意为改革者倡导单独监禁,和用劳役作为改革他们的方式,逻辑清晰,点名是2种方式。
D项错误同B,for表为了错。
E项逻辑错,主张为了单独监禁和劳役作为一种方式?错
题目讨论 (10条评论)

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522669gyd
A不选的更主要的原因是reform them中的them指代不清(reformers or prisioners),语义上其实还是说得通的
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0 回复 2022-01-19 11:25:32
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jhl
D错: "for the means of prisoner reform" is wordy, unidiomatic A错: “held in hard labor" is unidiomatic
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0 回复 2021-10-22 19:34:32
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贾思敏
B哪里是重心改变了,明明是who were advocating,用了were doing形式,时态错误啊,不是吗
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0 回复 2021-09-10 12:55:44
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528893liuzu
不选AB:被动相对不优
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0 回复 2020-09-23 18:43:33
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JoyceWong回复528893liuzu
主动优于被动已经是很落后的看法了 RON的课上给了数据被动和主动是一半一半
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0 回复 2021-03-24 14:15:05
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港三冲啊回复528893liuzu
但是感觉很多时候做题,真的是更加偏向去选择主动,被动被选择的可能性有,但是不大
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0 回复 2021-07-23 16:40:21
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你这只猪
OG解析 E: the insertion of as the means for prisoner reform placed before ( rather than after) confinement and hard labor-the object of verb advocating-renders the reulting sentence unncecessarily awkward.
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0 回复 2020-07-25 10:08:58
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jijicaier
as the means to
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0 回复 2020-06-10 21:51:23
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jijicaier
虚拟语气1。主将从现If you go I will go too。 2。过去时 + 过去将来时 If you went I would go too。 3。过去完成时 + 过去将来完成时
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0 回复 2020-06-10 21:45:06
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Stanley想去荷兰
解析讲的不是很满意,我的理解是:A)so as to=in order to ,但其主语是reformer 还是prisoner 不清楚,而且them指代不清 B)their指代不明,to be held 将要做,不合句意 C)正确,平行正确,没有代词歧义,to do表示目的用得挺好 D)for the means of为了这种方式???不如C的to do呢 E)错误同D,且位置也有问题。关于解析说的句子重心那一套,看看就行见仁见智,网友逼逼赖赖也不是绝对正确。之前一段时间总被网友那套理论误导就很气。
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0 回复 2020-01-02 13:29:49
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小牛奶milky
IDIOM ERROR 'FOR THE MEANS OF' for本来就表达目的
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0 回复 2019-11-07 09:04:48
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小狮子雷欧王
原文:ESP监狱被改革者们建立,改革者主张把将囚犯单独监禁和劳役,(的目的是)为了(So as to)改造他们。
原文整体逻辑没错,细微处需改变。
A:be held in solitary confinement and hard labor,and前后关系错误,be held in hard labor;
B:定语从句who were,逻辑重心变化;and同A错误;
C:正确;
D:Who定语从句错误同B;for the means of 错误逻辑&搭配,for the means-为了手段?错;
E:意思逻辑与原文不同。0
0 回复 2019-10-27 20:12:43