雷哥网GMAT-【OG20-P803-854题】The first trenches that were cut into a 500-acre s_OG16

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【OG20-P803-854题】

The first trenches that were cut into a 500-acre site at Tell Hamoukar, Syria, have yielded strong evidence for centrally administered complex societies in northern regions of the Middle East that were arising simultaneously with but independently of the more celebrated city-states of southern Mesopotamia, in what is now southern Iraq.

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that were cut into a 500-acre site at Tell Hamoukar, Syria, have yielded strong evidence for centrally administered complex societies in northern regions of the Middle East that were arising simultaneously with but
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that were cut into a 500-acre site at Tell Hamoukar, Syria, yields strong evidence that centrally administered complex societies in northern regions of the Middle East were arising simultaneously with but also
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having been cut into a 500-acre site at Tell Hamoukar, Syria, have yielded strong evidence that centrally administered complex societies in northern regions of the Middle East were arising simultaneously but
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cut into a 500-acre site at Tell Hamoukar, Syria, yields strong evidence of centrally administered complex societies in northern regions of the Middle East arising simultaneously but also
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cut into a 500-acre site at Tell Hamoukar, Syria, have yielded strong evidence that centrally administered complex societies in northern regions of the Middle East arose simultaneously with but
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当前版本由吃着香蕉开跑车更新于2021-05-21 15:14:33 感谢由吃着香蕉开跑车对此题目的解答所做出的贡献。

选E
后面讲的是evidence的内容，解释抽象名词的内容用that同位语从句，排除evidence for/of，即AD选项。
B选项，主谓单复数不一致（trenches... yields）
C选项，having done/having been done不能做定语修饰名词
E选项，正确

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499685skw

应该是evidence that

0 0 回复 2022-09-27 11:02:08
499685skw回复499685skw

A -- that were cut可以用cut（done定语)替换，更简洁的修饰；evidence 后面跟的是其内容，所以要用evidence that，而不是evidence for；that were arising，文中没有明确的时间标记词表示“在过去的时间中一直在进行”，所以用arose即可。 B -- yields不对；but also成了并列关系并非转折，错。 C -- having been时态不对，并且have be啰嗦;were arising错误同A。 D -- yields错；evidence of 错； but also错。选E

0 0 回复 2022-09-27 11:10:45

一小坨乌龟子回复499685skw

做了这么长时间题，终于做到同一天的评论了5555

0 0 回复 2022-09-27 16:06:26
柴郡

A、that were cut没有cut简洁；evidence for错误

0 0 回复 2022-07-26 00:13:04
evawang

E项中的cut into难道不会被认为是谓语结构吗

0 0 回复 2022-06-21 15:53:32

sarahooo

选项E，正确，提主干，The first trenches ...have yielded strong evidence that ... societies (in northern regions of the Middle East) arose simultaneously with but independently of the city-states(城邦) (of southern Mesopotamia, in what is now southern Iraq.)
选项A，原文逻辑有误， The first trenches ... have yielded evidence for ... societies，第一条战壕为社会提供了证据？原文想表达的意思应该是“第一条战壕为中东北部地区的中央集权的复杂社会是与美索不达米亚南部(即现在的伊拉克南部)的更为著名的城邦同时兴起但独立于这些城邦之外这件事提供了有力的证据”
选项BD，主谓单复数不一致（trenches... yields）
选项C，having done/having been done不能做定语后置修饰名词

0 0 回复 2022-04-14 15:48:23

杀鸡大户

1、根据but also排除bd 2、evidence 后面应该是对其的补充说明，用that修饰，排除ad 3、having been done / having done不能做定语修饰n，排除c 选d

0 0 回复 2022-03-24 20:41:15
目标750

yields 单数错误，排除BD evidence for/evidence for错误，排除A C：having been 与 cut语义重复，因为cut 的过去分词形式cut本身就可以修饰trenches；且simultaneously需要与with 搭配使用，表示“与....同时”

0 0 回复 2021-06-05 13:54:53
William(GMAT 750+)

cut的过去分词是原型

2 0 回复 2021-03-16 18:53:06
171570aaqd

1.定语修饰短语优于句子 2.同位结构优选

0 0 回复 2021-03-14 16:57:51
septcam

cut过去分词还是cut

4 0 回复 2020-07-31 18:09:07
凡人L

1. that were cut结构繁复，直接that cut即可（排除AB） 2.主语是复数，谓语动词用复数（排除BD） 3.having done做后置定语必错（排除C）综上，选（E）

1 0 回复 2020-07-24 10:32:05