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【OG20-P803-854题】

The first trenches that were cut into a 500-acre site at Tell Hamoukar, Syria, have yielded strong evidence for centrally administered complex societies in northern regions of the Middle East that were arising simultaneously with but independently of the more celebrated city-states of southern Mesopotamia, in what is now southern Iraq.

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that were cut into a 500-acre site at Tell Hamoukar, Syria, have yielded strong evidence for centrally administered complex societies in northern regions of the Middle East that were arising simultaneously with but
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that were cut into a 500-acre site at Tell Hamoukar, Syria, yields strong evidence that centrally administered complex societies in northern regions of the Middle East were arising simultaneously with but also
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having been cut into a 500-acre site at Tell Hamoukar, Syria, have yielded strong evidence that centrally administered complex societies in northern regions of the Middle East were arising simultaneously but
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cut into a 500-acre site at Tell Hamoukar, Syria, yields strong evidence of centrally administered complex societies in northern regions of the Middle East arising simultaneously but also
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cut into a 500-acre site at Tell Hamoukar, Syria, have yielded strong evidence that centrally administered complex societies in northern regions of the Middle East arose simultaneously with but
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选E
后面讲的是evidence的内容，解释抽象名词的内容用that同位语从句，排除evidence for/of，即AD选项。
B选项，主谓单复数不一致（trenches... yields）
C选项，having done/having been done不能做定语修饰名词
E选项，正确

当前版本由一只大鲨鱼更新于2020-03-11 14:32:36 感谢由一只大鲨鱼对此题目的解答所做出的贡献。

解析不是很完善，我试着解答一下：A，定语从句that were cut不简洁，arising的ing形式没有根据 B,定于从句简洁，yields主谓不一致，but also做并列不符合句意 C，having 没有依据选择ing形式，arising同理 D，yields主谓不一致，but also不行，evidence of ……错误，原句意思是对证据的解释，而非是某个事物的其中一部分证据 E，正确

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sarahooo

选项E，正确，提主干，The first trenches ...have yielded strong evidence that ... societies (in northern regions of the Middle East) arose simultaneously with but independently of the city-states(城邦) (of southern Mesopotamia, in what is now southern Iraq.)
选项A，原文逻辑有误， The first trenches ... have yielded evidence for ... societies，第一条战壕为社会提供了证据？原文想表达的意思应该是“第一条战壕为中东北部地区的中央集权的复杂社会是与美索不达米亚南部(即现在的伊拉克南部)的更为著名的城邦同时兴起但独立于这些城邦之外这件事提供了有力的证据”
选项BD，主谓单复数不一致（trenches... yields）
选项C，having done/having been done不能做定语后置修饰名词

0 回复 2022-04-14 15:48:23

杀鸡大户

1、根据but also排除bd 2、evidence 后面应该是对其的补充说明，用that修饰，排除ad 3、having been done / having done不能做定语修饰n，排除c 选d

0 0 回复 2022-03-24 20:41:15
目标750

yields 单数错误，排除BD evidence for/evidence for错误，排除A C：having been 与 cut语义重复，因为cut 的过去分词形式cut本身就可以修饰trenches；且simultaneously需要与with 搭配使用，表示“与....同时”

0 0 回复 2021-06-05 13:54:53
William(GMAT 750+)

cut的过去分词是原型

2 0 回复 2021-03-16 18:53:06
171570aaqd

1.定语修饰短语优于句子 2.同位结构优选

0 0 回复 2021-03-14 16:57:51
septcam

cut过去分词还是cut

2 0 回复 2020-07-31 18:09:07
凡人L

1. that were cut结构繁复，直接that cut即可（排除AB） 2.主语是复数，谓语动词用复数（排除BD） 3.having done做后置定语必错（排除C）综上，选（E）

1 0 回复 2020-07-24 10:32:05
cindayyy

have evidence for sb. that arose simultaneously with but independently of blahblah have evidence that sb. arose simultaneously with but independently of blahblah

0 0 回复 2020-04-17 14:11:55
小火火火箭

E选项为啥是arose simultaneously with？带上with这个介词总感觉和后面的不平行

4 0 回复 2019-10-09 12:42:45
ELMO_Y回复小火火火箭

A arose simultaneously with B;A independently of B;

5 0 回复 2019-10-14 21:12:43
dGee

主语是the first trenches，谓语yield用复数，排除BD having done做后置定语必错，排除C A:that were cut into 错在wordy，不简洁，这里were cut into不是谓语，是后置定语，cut into就行， n+Ved, 前提这里V不是动词，这里符合不是动词，所以A错

1 0 回复 2019-09-01 11:24:10