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【OG20-P796-820题】

According to scientists who monitored its path, an expanding cloud of energized particles ejected from the Sun recently triggered a large storm in the magnetic field that surrounds Earth, which brightened the Northern Lights and also possibly knocking out a communications satellite.

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an expanding cloud of energized particles ejected from the Sun recently triggered a large storm in the magnetic field that surrounds Earth, which brightened the Northern Lights and also possibly knocking
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an expanding cloud of energized particles ejected from the Sun was what recently triggered a large storm in the magnetic field that surrounds Earth, and it brightened the Northern Lights and also possibly knocked
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an expanding cloud of energized particles ejected from the Sun recently triggered a large storm in the magnetic field that surrounds Earth, brightening the Northern Lights and possibly knocking
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a large storm in the magnetic field that surrounds Earth, recently triggered by an expanding cloud of energized particles, brightened the Northern Lights and it possibly knocked
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a large storm in the magnetic field surrounding Earth was recently triggered by an expanding cloud of energized particles, brightening the Northern Lights and it possibly knocked
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当前版本由 216505pr 更新于2021-11-22 18:01:44 感谢由 216505pr 对此题目的解答所做出的贡献。

A，whihc就近修饰earth错

B，svo and it vo，it指代s，即cloud，逻辑错

C, 正确

D，主次关系和原文不一致

E，不简洁

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选C

A选项句子结构中which frightened...and knocking...不平行，且knocking不能作谓语，结构错误

B选项句子结构an expanding cloud was what...结构不简洁，且and it brightened and knocked和前面的句子并列，逻辑错误。翻译：据监测其路径的科学家们说，最近在地球周围的磁场中引发了一场巨大的风暴，并使北极光明亮，并可能摧毁了一颗通讯卫星。

C正确。翻译：据监测其路径的科学家称，一团不断膨胀的从太阳喷射出来的带电粒子云最近在围绕地球的磁场中引发了一场大风暴，点亮了北极光，可能还摧毁了一颗通讯卫星。

D选项particles ejected from the Sun信息丢失，且句子结构错误，a storm后无谓语动词

E选项particles ejected from the Sun信息丢失，且and it knocked这里做主句逻辑错误。翻译：根据监测其路径的科学家们的说法，最近，围绕地球磁场的一场大风暴，是由不断膨胀的带电粒子云所引发的，照亮了北极光，并它可能摧毁了一颗通讯卫星。

0 回复 2021-05-08 15:08:24

jy980404

提供一个新思路：看未划线部分：monitored its path，可以推测出its path 指的是从cloud变成storm的过程，所以后面的主句必须是cloud 而不是storm，因此排除DE

2 0 回复 2020-10-31 12:10:01
Go800回复jy980404

对而且是expanding的cloud，所以应该观察的是cloud，而不是storm。我以为是storm刚开始，是因为我经常看台风之类的报告默认就是要来台风暴雨了，其实观察台风也是观察的台风眼的移动而不是其结果暴雨的移动。

0 1 回复 2020-11-20 00:36:28
你这只猪

没注意到CD缺少文字，更一个严重的错误是我以为风暴照亮了北极和摧毁卫星，百度之后才知道是带电云团

2 0 回复 2020-07-21 17:07:55
1036912wrbwm回复你这只猪

我也是

0 0 回复 2020-11-12 08:21:25
746860xgow

B错在it指代不清

0 0 回复 2020-05-25 07:42:05
iu

A which修饰earth 错误 B it指代模糊 C 正确 DE 主语变成了storm

0 0 回复 2020-05-08 15:58:48
337016jipf

句意是：根据监测其路径的科学家，从太阳喷出的带电粒子的膨胀云最近在环绕地球的磁场中引发了一场大风暴，使北极光变亮，并可能敲晕通信卫星。句意判断是brightening这个动作应当是an expanding cloud因此排除CD。这是一个S+V,ing的形式，A B 如何排除其他网友有说，我就不讲了

1 1 回复 2019-12-09 16:27:14
windyy

brightening和knocking到底是修饰cloud还是strom？

2 0 回复 2019-10-12 21:51:52
425337g回复windyy

主语，就近的主谓关系或整句

0 0 回复 2019-11-04 17:32:22

不是你的回复windyy

strom

0 0 回复 2019-12-10 12:14:47

全智贤回复 windyy

这俩都不是。指的是整件事的结果。比如I ate an apple, contributing to my health. 这个contributing修饰的既不是I也不是apple，而是前面整句话带来的结果

0 0 回复 2020-02-08 16:10:59
AUCHUI

The timing and logical relationships among the events described in this sentence are of utmost importance. The scientists monitored a cloud ejected from the Sun. The cloud triggered a large storm, whose consequences were the brightening of the Northern Lights and the possible knocking out of a satellite. The latter two events are in a conjunction, so they should be represented by similar verb forms

0 0 回复 2018-12-26 18:45:27
Rofinia

D，E丢东西了

0 0 回复 2018-08-09 15:39:57
默默

DE句子中心改变

0 0 回复 2018-05-07 23:36:37