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She was less successful after she had emigrated to New York compared to her native Germany, photographer Lotte Jacobi nevertheless earned a small group of discerning admirers, and her photographs were eventually exhibited in prestigious galleries across the United States.

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当前版本由 见过夏天去非洲拍动物世界 更新于2017-01-03 14:58:35 感谢由 见过夏天去非洲拍动物世界 对此题目的解答所做出的贡献。

This sentence compares the success Jacobi experienced after moving to New York to the success she had previously experienced in Germany. The phrase less  successful anticipates the conclusion of the comparison with the phrase than...The main subject of the sentence is photographer Lotte Jacobi, and the main verb is earned. The opening clause She was less successful...therefore creates a comma splice if the comma is not followed by a conjunction. The most efficient way to incorporate the information about Jacobi’s comparative successes in Germany and in New York is to turn this clause into an adjectival phrase describing Jacobi.

(A) Less successful . . . anticipates than rather than compared to . . .; a comma is insufficient to join two independent clauses into a single sentence.

(B) As compared to is an incorrect way to complete the comparison introduced by less; Being . . . is unnecessarily wordy and awkward.

(C) Correct. The idiomatic construction less successful . . . than is incorporated into an introductory adjectival phrase modifying Lotte Jacobi.

(D) When compared to is an incorrect phrase to complete the comparison introduced by less.

(E) (A) comma is insufficient to join two independent clauses into a single sentence; past-perfect tense is misleading, since it refers to Jacobi’s experience in New York, which in fact followed her experience in Germany.


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    略略略肥肥

    A.B. Less要和than搭配,并且compare to是比作的意思,排除。 D.although随意加入改变句子语气,排除。 E.had been时态错误,并且Germany之后的逗号无法连接前后二个完整的句子,排除
    0 0 回复 2020-01-13 20:47:56
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    432442ba

    如果后半句没有nevertheless,那前面的状语就必须得加although了,因为既不表伴随也不表原因,而是表让步。
    0 0 回复 2019-10-09 16:53:46
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    Zhazha

    less successful 比较级,要than,不能用compare to 排除ABD
    AE 句子run-on, 逗号不能直接连两个句子
    C. 比较对象是两段经历,不是两个地点。 after she had emigrated to NY 比 she had been in GMY. 其他几个比较都是经历比地方
    D although + nevertheless 冗余
    E had been after Germany, 这里过去完成时错误,德国的经历在美国以前,德国的才是过去的过去
    0 0 回复 2019-09-03 14:45:32
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    dGee

    AE老毛病,逗号不能连接前后两个句子
    B也是,being没做主语,being+adj,wordy冗余不简洁
    D:有less,没有than,当然错啦
    0 0 回复 2019-09-01 22:40:54
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    EscapeFromFate

    比较对象的问题,emigrated to New York这是一段经历,只能跟另一段经历对比,只有she had been in her native Germany可以,所以排除其他所有选项
    0 0 回复 2019-01-18 16:28:34
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    EscapeFromFate

    ABE时态顺序错误,had在after之后,CD对比,emigrating用法错误
    0 0 回复 2019-01-18 16:23:25
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    蓝莓提子

    e 逗号又链接2个句子
    0 0 回复 2019-01-16 21:22:10
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    进步大于完美

    A当中she 作为主语的句子和p作为主语的句子之间没有用连词等连接。
    0 0 回复 2018-05-22 13:59:18
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    默默

    E没有过去动作做对比
    0 0 回复 2018-04-13 16:46:34
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    Joyce L

    A (she had emigrated to)her native Germany,和she had emigrated to New York,不合理

    B (she had emigrated to)her native Germany,和she had emigrated to New York,不合理

    D (she had emigrated to)her native Germany,和she had emigrated to New York,不合理

    E (she had emigrated)in her native Germany,和she had emigrated to New York,不合理


    0 0 回复 2017-12-03 12:10:34
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