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As the honeybee’s stinger is heavily barbed, staying where it is inserted, this results in the act of stinging causing the bee to sustain a fatal injury.
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c选项讲的是这个 stinger导致致命后果；但E讲的是The honeybee's stinger is heavily barbed and stays where it is inserted, 这个事情伴随导致的结果；从意思上讲，后者更合理。
D一是错在逻辑意思，二是错在results in the act of stinging causing有歧义。
A this results错误；
B with the result that错误；
小良冠二郎
解析说b选项with the result that 错误，e选项就不错啦？ctmd
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2023-03-14 15:53:30
304770jdnt
第二次错了，C表示的是stinger results in...，但应该是stinger整个的动作造成了结果
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2022-10-18 16:10:31
185380cw
不是stinger导致了fatal injury, 而是stinger stays where it is inserted这个行为导致的，所以CD都是错的
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2020-09-25 17:39:53
Aurora816
看了大神们的分析，总结如下； A） As the honeybee’s stinger is heavily barbed, staying where it is inserted, this results in the act of stinging causing • This的指代不明确 • 介词后面的名词不能在有ING结构，this results in the act of stinging，错我详细分析如下： first off, the construction (preposition) + NOUN + VERBing is WRONG, unless the preposition refers directly to the NOUN. (that isn't usually the case, so, if you're in doubt, you should strike choices with this sort of construction.) for instance: i've never heard of bees stinging dogs WRONG. this is not an issue of whether you've heard of bees themselves; it's an issue of whether you've heard of their stinging dogs. ...results in the act of stinging causing... WRONG. this doesn't result in the act of stinging itself; it results in what is caused by the act of stinging. i have a picture of my cousin playing hockey. CORRECT. this time, the picture is actually of my cousin, so we're good. therefore, (a) and (d) are wrong because of "...results in the act of stinging causing...". B） As the heavily barbed stinger of the honeybee stays where it is inserted, with the result that the act of stinging causes • as…, with…，因为As是一个连词，后面需要一个句子而不能是一个介词结构，句子结构不完整错误 C） Honeybee’s stinger, heavily barbed and staying where it is inserted, results in the fact that the act of stinging causes • heavily barbed and staying where it is inserted，不能构成并列结构 • Honeybee’s stinger results in the fact that the act of stinging causes，逻辑错误，Stinger造成事实 • TAKEAWAY: you can only say "X results in Y" when X is an ACTION. if X is an OBJECT, you can NEVER say that X "results" in anything. D) The heavily barbed stinger of the honeybee stays where it is inserted, and results in the act of stinging causing • And results in缺少主语 • 共享主语也不合理，应为Stinger不能导致一个结构（再次，动作导致一个结果，名词不能导致一个结构） • In the act of stinging causing 错误的结构
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2018-12-26 07:16:12
超哥哥回复Aurora816
大神厉害了
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2019-01-26 13:50:17
jassicacanidy
这个解析有问题吧。。。B有with the result that错误？！正确选项E也有with the result that。。。
B错是因为As作为一个connector和with作为一个介词不能同时使用
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2018-12-14 12:02:27
jamesyayy
考场上的选择： A：this指代排除 B：无主语 C：逻辑错误 不是他的stinger导致了叮人这样的行为会损伤；而是他的stinger是barbed的会留在叮人的地方导致了叮人的行为会损伤 D：同C E：with the result伴随状语，修饰句子
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2018-08-10 13:52:31
ChanZhao回复jamesyayy
B后半句也没有动词
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2019-01-18 17:55:43
不上740不改名
this 不能指代前面提到的内容吗？
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2018-05-27 11:06:44
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RON:
first off, the construction (preposition) + NOUN + VERBing is WRONG, unless the preposition refers directly to the NOUN. (that isn't usually the case, so, if you're in doubt, you should strike choices with this sort of construction.)
for instance:
i've never heard of bees stinging dogs
WRONG. this is not an issue of whether you've heard of bees themselves; it's an issue of whether you've heard of their stinging dogs.
...results in the act of stinging causing...
WRONG. this doesn't result in the act of stinging itself; it results in what is caused by the act of stinging.
i have a picture of my cousin playing hockey.
CORRECT. this time, the picture is actually of my cousin, so we're good.
therefore, (a) and (d) are wrong because of "...results in the act of stinging causing...".
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the pronoun "this" in (a) doesn't refer to any particular noun. this consideration also kills (a).
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you can't say "the stinger results in...".
"results in..." can only be used when it's LITERALLY TRUE. for instance, you could say that the attempt resulted in failure, since the attempt ITSELF ended in failure.
if you understand this literal meaning, then it goes without saying that you can't use this sort of construction for physical objects.
TAKEAWAY:
you can only say "X results in Y" when X is an ACTION. if X is an OBJECT, you can NEVER say that X "results" in anything.
this kills choices (c) and (d), in which "stinger" is the subject of the verb "results".
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choice (b) misuses the connector "as".
the connector "as" connects two complete sentences BY ITSELF. if "as" is used to connect two complete sentences, it should NOT be used in conjunction with any other connector words.
in choice (b), "as" and "with" are used together. the use of either of these prohibits the use of the other, so this choice is wrong.
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not sure what you're asking in #3. it looks like at least 2 completely different questions.
the MEANING of the sentence is that the bee's stinger stays where it's placed, and so the bee dies because it can't get away after the sting.
as far as HOW TO SPLIT, you'll notice that i've given several different angles from which to approach this one.
there aren't really genuine "splits" - i.e., easily identifiable points of divergence between clearly parallel items - so you just have to try to identify any of the multitude of errors present.
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2018-04-03 03:39:22
ZYQ0928回复桐桐
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2019-05-08 20:53:13
dreamwithL
令人窒息的解析，这种怎么过审的，，，
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2018-03-29 13:52:56
KarenaKoo
B中的AS引导原因状语从句的话，没有主句，所以错了。原解释关于B的解答是错的
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2018-02-04 11:35:48
糖糖要加油
还是要从句子意思出发，讲的是The honeybee's stinger is heavily barbed and stays where it is inserted这个事情导致了什么结果，也不是单纯的stinger这个东西导致的结果
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2018-01-14 14:01:23
777hk
ab选项：as...后，需要加完整的句子 as....,with,,,, 整个句子缺少完整主谓结构？
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2017-11-04 13:51:12
舒服是留给死人的
C怎么了。。
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2017-10-20 19:46:37
angelarain22
Ron的解释 https://www.manhattanprep.com/gmat/forums/as-the-honeybeea-s-stinger-is-heavily-barbed-t7194.html
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2017-08-21 23:21:47
lxc123
刚刚回答错了 应该是as后加句子，as+句子，句子 才对 排除AB
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