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Sunspots, vortices of gas associated with strong electromagnetic activity, are visible as dark spots on the surface of the Sun but have never been sighted on the Sun’s poles or equator.
分析A选项
分析B选项
分析C选项
分析D选项
分析E选项
本句的主干是:Sunspots are visible,have never been 是后面句子的谓语。当前版本由 哈哈 更新于2017-05-11 00:50:52 感谢由 哈哈 对此题目的解答所做出的贡献。
A 选项正确
B that never have been sighted on the surface of the Sun 语意不明,并且,on the surface of the Sun the Sun’s poles or equator,这两个短语放在一起不符合语法规则,一个句子里俩主语。
C,D选型的although引导让步状语从句,但是缺少了主语和谓语
E 选项 不符合英语的表达方式
B.首先要看清楚句子的完整结构(主谓宾)很明显,never have been sighted on the surface of the Sun进一步解释说明spots,按这样来说整个句子结构就是sunspots are visible as dark spots.好像没错, 但看看后面划线部分和未划线部分,也就是never have been sighted on the surface of the Sun+the Sun’s poles or equator.这就很明显一读就会发现错误了。
C.although后面要加完整的句子结构,上面解释的没错,但是although前后句子如果有相同的主谓宾,although的主谓可省,其实C的although后面+never have been 就可以了
D having been在G中,我至今没有看见选项出现这个是对的。although后加完整的主谓宾,不加分词短语。
E.which就近原则,修饰the Sun’s suface, which后面的修饰对象不对。
499685skw
解释说的很好,原句主句应该是are visible,重点是他们是可视的,对比他们在太阳的赤道和两极找不到(不可视)。而不是他们呈现的方式是黑洞……
981874b
Visible as / appear as的区别 1. Visible = The object already exists, is not moving, and you are able to see it.本来就存在的东西 2. Appear = The object is created as you're looking, or it moves into your path of vision. 观察时出现的东西 黑子的描述用Visible更合理一些。它们已经存在,而且它们并没有进入你的视觉路径。这句话只是说明您能够看到它们,而不是说它们四处移动或在您眼前创建。 所以可以排除CDE 【时态错误】 现在完成时(以助动词has/have为标志)用来描述在过去结束但继续影响现在的事件,而现在完成进行时(以has/have been为标志)是指从过去开始并持续到现在的行为的正确时态。 【选项】 B.选项改变原文意思。并且与划线后部分重复 Sunspots, vortices of gas associated with strong electromagnetic activity, are visible as dark spots that never have been sighted on the surface of the Sun( the Sun’s Poles or equator) 除此之外,把but改成了that改变了原文的意思。 C.Although 后面的从句需要主语,并且选项用的是Sighted,过去式的主动形式,无法解释现在,sunspots 应该是被观察到。 D. Although 后面的从句需要主语;时态错误,现在完成进行时动词“having been seen”来指在过去结束但继续影响现在的动作;改变意思 E.which就近修饰the sun's surface,稍微改变了意思.
680461elv
Although后面要接完整的句子。
FFFAYYY
首先Visible as / appear as的区别 1. Visible = The object already exists, is not moving, and you are able to see it.本来就存在的东西 2. Appear = The object is created as you're looking, or it moves into your path of vision. 观察时出现的东西 黑子的描述用Visible更合理一些。它们已经存在,而且它们并没有进入你的视觉路径。这句话只是说明您能够看到它们,而不是说它们四处移动或在您眼前创建。 所以可以排除CDE 【时态错误】 现在完成时(以助动词has/have为标志)用来描述在过去结束但继续影响现在的事件,而现在完成进行时(以has/have been为标志)是指从过去开始并持续到现在的行为的正确时态。 【选项】 B.选项改变原文意思。并且与划线后部分重复 Sunspots, vortices of gas associated with strong electromagnetic activity, are visible as dark spots that never have been sighted on the surface of the Sun( the Sun’s Poles or equator) 除此之外,把but改成了that改变了原文的意思。 C.Although 后面的从句需要主语,并且选项用的是Sighted,过去式的主动形式,无法解释现在,sunspots 应该是被观察到。 D. Although 后面的从句需要主语;时态错误,现在完成进行时动词“having been seen”来指在过去结束但继续影响现在的动作;改变意思 E.which就近修饰the sun's surface,稍微改变了意思.
218447jwka
d选项很让人犹豫。但是总体看了一下有两点需要考虑的: although的使用,使得句子重心变成了appear on surface 而不是没有被sighted--》句子翻译过来就变成 尽管并不能在太阳两极看到,sunspot还是出现在太阳表面,语义奇怪且不合理。 另外一个地方在于sight at 与sight on 【外网解释说是sight at 观测者是站在那个地点的,sight on 是指在哪里被看到的】
Jennysolarenergy
b 两个sun多余 cd although只能放开头 e which被隔开 无法修饰sunspots
。。。?
什么垃圾解释,c是主被动错了,d是时态错了,although没什么问题
babyweezy
原意是太阳黑子出现在表面,但是没有在两极被观察到。这两个意思都是主要意思,CD改变句意。BE指代错误。选A
847716opn
Having been done跳跃时态 although句子要有主谓
Nhltz2m
although、since等这些词要引导一个整句,主谓都得有
Karita
(A)are visible as dark spots on the surface of the Sun but have never been sighted on 【正确】 “are visible as dark spots on the surface of the Sun”和“have never been sighted on the Sun's poles or equator”用“but”平行在一起,语法上正确,表意也十分合理。 【大意】 太阳黑子,和强电磁活动相关的气旋,以黑点形式在太阳表面可见,但从未在太阳的两极或赤道被发现。 (B)are visible as dark spots that never have been sighted on the surface of the Sun 【错误】 平行结构:“are visible as dark spots”和“never have been sighted”逻辑含义上应当平行,共同描述“sunspots”的两种性质——“太阳黑子”以黑点形式在太阳表面出现,但从未在太阳两极和赤道被发现(即(A)的大意)。而本选项将这两者变为修饰关系,用“never have been sighted”修饰“dark spots”,则其大意为“太阳黑子以从未在两极或赤道出现的海淀在太阳表面出现”,逊于(A)选项的含义。 句子意思:“of the Sun”是一个赘余的结构,和其后的“the Sun's poles”完全无法衔接。 (C)appear on the surface of the Sun as dark spots although never sighted at 【错误】 句子意思:句子的结构含义不合理,“although”后面连接的应为让步的结构,其不会作为一个句意的中心,而根据日常逻辑,“太阳黑子从未在太阳两极或赤道被发现”是本句句意重心之一,因此(C)表意逊于(A)。 (D)appear as dark spots on the surface of the Sun, although never having been sighted at 【错误】 句子意思:见(C)。 (E)appear as dark spots on the Sun's surface, which have never been sighted on 【错误】 平行结构:类似地,见(B)。 【最优解题思路推荐】 当平行结构把应该平行的东西——语法功能一致,逻辑概念对等的结构排练在一起时,可以非常工整地反应一个事物的两个侧面或一句话的两方面内容,其表意具有优越性。因此选择(A)。
somisomi
我是这样理解的 sunpots让我不自主会先看单复数,没有可以排除的。 再看语意,主干主谓宾,sunspots are visible。怎么个visible法?它在太阳的表面像是一些黑点儿一样的visible法。然后have never been sighted on sun's poles or equator是说“从来没有在太阳的两极或者赤道被看到过”。整个句子是在说,sunspots这个东西在太阳的表面看起来像是一些黑点点一样,但是sunpots从来没有在太阳的两极跟赤道被看到发现过。 你会发现,原句没有任何的问题。但是还是要看看接下来的其他选项排除一下 B的问题在于,它把语意改成了黑点从来没有在太阳表面被看到过。 C,Although是连词,要连接两个完整的句子但是前面却没有逗号 D,having been done句型,基本都错 E,which 修饰不对。of比's更优。appear改变句意,排除。
阿十八大哦不准备
原句语意:太阳黑子是在太阳表面可见的黑色点点,但是在太阳两级及赤道附近不常见。 逻辑语意讲得通,所以不改变原句逻 原句为主系表结构,CDE改成了主谓宾结构,排除。原句“但是”的语意讲得通,且But前后两句是独立的,即“黑子是在太阳表面可见的黑色点点”和“黑子在太阳两级及吃到附近不常见”,而B中成了主从结构,定语从句,that修饰的是dark spot,错
Twenty
补充一下10楼,前面我觉得都说的对,但是补全省略以后,改变了原文意义上的完成时态 另外appear改变原句合理逻辑直接排除cde
AUCHUI
如果是,but,就是第二个谓语了吗?
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