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【OG20-P795-811题】
Elizabeth Barber, the author of both Prehistoric Textiles, a comprehensive work on cloth in the early cultures of the Mediterranean, and also of Women’s Work, a more general account of early cloth manufacture, is an expert authority on textiles in ancient societies.
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当前版本由 GMACNMSL 更新于2021-05-18 17:08:07 感谢由 GMACNMSL 对此题目的解答所做出的贡献。选E
A选项both...and also of 不平行，且expert authority语义重复
B选项错误同A
C&D both...and of后面结构不平行
E正确。翻译：Elizabeth Barber，Prehistoric Textiles和Women's Work两本书的作者，是古代纺织界的权威。
把句子分开，主语EB，（插入语1the author of 【both Prehistoric Textiles】），（插入语2a comprehensive work on cloth in the early cultures of the Mediterranean），（插入语3and Women’s Work, a more general account of early cloth manufacture）, 谓语is宾语 an authority on textiles in ancient societies.
RON讲过，在发现这一题是考平行结构的时候，不要从左往右读，从右往左找平行指示词后相应对应的部分。在去掉对第一个插入语the author of 【both Prehistoric Textiles】进行解释和修饰的插入语2a comprehensive work on cloth in the early cultures of the Mediterranean之后，句子现在剩下插入语1和3，即：
主语EB，（插入语1the author of 【both Prehistoric Textiles】），插入语3and？？？？？？？？。前面已经讲过平行结构是要从右往左形成对应的，而这里的平行指示词是both...and...,and后面应该跟和平行指示词both一样的结构，也就是一个单个名词为第一位的结构，现在分析五个选项：
A.【also of Women’s Work, a more general account of early cloth manufacture, 】is an expert authority on
右侧and后面跟的是also，明显和左侧both后面只跟了名词Prehistoric Textiles不平行，A选项错误明显，可以排除
B.【also Women’s Work, a more general account of cloth manufacture,】 is an expert authority about
这里看起来好像平行实则不然，第一and后面跟了also，同样和both后面跟的结构不对称；第二没有both...and also这一用法；第三expert和authority语义重复，B选项连犯三个错误，应当第一个排除。
C.【of Women’s Work, a more general account about early cloth manufacture,】 is an authority on
这里我也选成了C，但是我很快反应过来好像不对，这是一个经典的迷惑性选项————and【of Women’s Work】被故意迷惑成了和 of the Mediterranean平行。但是仔细思考一下，平行不只要求语法上的平行，更要求语义上的平行。Mediterranean和Women’s Work没有平行对等性（参见RON第一堂关于平行的课）。而且前文当中已经有both，这里的and又是句中唯一一个and，也就是说只有这两个词是平行指示词，所以仍然从右往左看，and of Women’s Work 和前面的both Prehistoric Textiles不平行，C选项排除。
D.of Women’s Work, a more general account about early cloth manufacture, is an expert authority about
犯的错误和BC一样，可以排除，错误类型不再赘述。
E.Women’s Work, a more general account of early cloth manufacture, is an authority on
完美的平行。【both Prehistoric Textiles, a comprehensive work on cloth in the early cultures of the Mediterranean,】和【and Women’s Work, a more general account of early cloth manufacture，】形成平行，选项正确。
suzzie
死活认不出来哪里有平行……
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2022-12-03 17:32:57
173398wnr
an expert authority on/about， a more general account of/about 有什么区别哦，介词分别选哪一个呢
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2022-10-03 12:03:04
兔小黄
就我这里看到的是on cloth in 吗？我还在想这是哪个我没看过的搭配呢....
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2022-07-12 02:38:42
兔小黄回复兔小黄
眼瞎了，both 在前面
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2022-07-12 02:39:43
唐多令
both and
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2022-01-01 11:08:15
逃之夭夭
test
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2021-10-12 16:48:56
GMACNMSL
这解释的是个什么cjb东西… 把句子分开，主语EB，（插入语1the author of 【both Prehistoric Textiles】），（插入语2a comprehensive work on cloth in the early cultures of the Mediterranean），（插入语3and Women’s Work, a more general account of early cloth manufacture）, 谓语is宾语 an authority on textiles in ancient societies. RON讲过，在发现这一题是考平行结构的时候，不要从左往右读，从右往左找平行指示词后相应对应的部分。在去掉对第一个插入语the author of 【both Prehistoric Textiles】进行解释和修饰的插入语2a comprehensive work on cloth in the early cultures of the Mediterranean之后，句子现在剩下插入语1和3，即： 主语EB，（插入语1the author of 【both Prehistoric Textiles】），插入语3and？？？？？？？？。前面已经讲过平行结构是要从右往左形成对应的，而这里的平行指示词是both...and...,and后面应该跟和平行指示词both一样的结构，也就是一个单个名词为第一位的结构，现在分析五个选项： A.【also of Women’s Work, a more general account of early cloth manufacture, 】is an expert authority on 右侧and后面跟的是also，明显和左侧both后面只跟了名词Prehistoric Textiles不平行，A选项错误明显，可以排除 B.【also Women’s Work, a more general account of cloth manufacture,】 is an expert authority about 这里看起来好像平行实则不然，第一and后面跟了also，同样和both后面跟的结构不对称；第二没有both...and also这一用法；第三expert和authority语义重复，B选项连犯三个错误，应当第一个排除。 C.【of Women’s Work, a more general account about early cloth manufacture,】 is an authority on 这里我也选成了C，但是我很快反应过来好像不对，这是一个经典的迷惑性选项————and【of Women’s Work】被故意迷惑成了和 of the Mediterranean平行。但是仔细思考一下，平行不只要求语法上的平行，更要求语义上的平行。Mediterranean和Women’s Work没有平行对等性（参见RON第一堂关于平行的课）。而且前文当中已经有both，这里的and又是句中唯一一个and，也就是说只有这两个词是平行指示词，所以仍然从右往左看，and of Women’s Work 和前面的both Prehistoric Textiles不平行，C选项排除。 D.of Women’s Work, a more general account about early cloth manufacture, is an expert authority about 犯的错误和BC一样，可以排除，错误类型不再赘述。 E.Women’s Work, a more general account of early cloth manufacture, is an authority on 完美的平行。【both Prehistoric Textiles, a comprehensive work on cloth in the early cultures of the Mediterranean,】和【and Women’s Work, a more general account of early cloth manufacture，】形成平行，选项正确。
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2021-04-19 16:07:23
lsgzq
B选项中的cloth manufacture缺少了early这个修饰词 也改变了句意
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2020-10-23 21:18:29
yukiZ
both A and B 是封闭平行,A和B要完全平行；A and B平行，根据ron的说法，一定从右到左看，只需要保证右边的部分在左边有对应就可以了。
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2020-10-14 19:08:48
dream du
考点：平行结构 选项分析：A.both ... and ...不平行，of去掉 B.expert和authority重复，且authority应该与on搭配而不是about C.both ... and ...不平行，of去掉 D.both ... and ...不平行，of去掉 E.正确
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2019-06-26 20:18:14
Jiamu
我说一下我的看法，我是这样理解的。and前后要independent classes，后面的句子你加了of，看上去和前面平行，但是前面of前修饰了of后的名词。逗号隔开 加and表并列。后面加of你没有modifier修饰。 这是我的理解
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2018-10-09 11:45:48
194395uqkz回复Jiamu
其实只是中间被一个插入语隔开，后面的and后面的内容只是在说她的另一本书而已，and前后不是独立句子，and后面有一个be动词，那才是main sentence开始的结构
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2020-05-18 11:53:50
张友锴
可以把中间, a comprehensive work on cloth in the early cultures of the Mediterranean, 省略不看，就变成，Elizabeth Barber, the author of both prehistoric Textiles and Women's work...
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2018-08-22 09:27:42
落英缤纷
注意句子结构，of both名词 and 名词
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2018-04-21 13:14:00
默默
both 在 and的后面
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2018-04-01 11:43:57
舒服是留给死人的
of both不是both of
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2017-10-01 15:47:41
晔晔
both...and...
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