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The Sports Medicine Programs of the Olympic Training Center, a complex where final tryouts are held for athletes representing the United States in the Olympics, is geared toward enhancing athletes' performance and toward their preparation for international competition.
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考察主谓一致和平行结构，主语是program,所以排除了AB当前版本由 高笑美 更新于2016-08-07 21:23:26 感谢由 高笑美 对此题目的解答所做出的贡献。
and 的平行结构要求前后一致，所以C(To enhance&their preparation)和D（toward the enhancement& towards preparing ）排除
选择E
补充一点，当平行标志词是and，but，yet，or时，从第二个开始be动词，情态动词，不定式可以省略
当前版本由 368008l 更新于2020-08-16 11:11:18 感谢由 368008l 对此题目的解答所做出的贡献。c中的preparation 和performance平行不可以吗？
1、主谓一致：Sports Medicine Programs 复数，is错 A/B排除
2、平行：and
（1）搭配：enhance the performance可以，enhance the preparation搭配不上，所以C不对
（2）enhancement和preparing不能构成平行，所以D不对
Ron: enhancement可以和the preparing平行，但是没有the限定的动名词就不行
（3）E中enhancing和preparing都没有限定，可以互相平行
Note：代词
此题中them可以指代athletes没有问题，有些时候代词的模糊可以允许，因为主谓一致和平行存在更严重的错误
499685skw
C选项中their指代不到athletes'，因为athletes'此时是形容词，所以错。还有一点是，是主语programs enhancing and preparing athletes，不是加强 athletes的performance and preparation。
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2022-09-29 20:03:46
VC FIGHT
感觉没人提动词优于名词这点？看到就秒选E了
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2022-09-11 14:20:24
NKZE
这题大家应该都纠结C和E，其实曼哈顿里有写一点就是代词必须指代名词，C的they很显然想指代运动员（athletes），但是前面没有这个词，出现的（athletes' ）其实在这里是一个形容词，所以they是不能指代它的
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2022-02-17 20:56:21
猜猜酱回复NKZE
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2022-07-25 23:46:00
江剑文回复NKZE
前面插入语出现了athletes了，C的their指代并没有问题，C的问题主要是在enhance... preparation的语义not make sense，建议大家最好搞清楚了再评论解析，不要误导其他同学。
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2022-09-06 18:41:20
嗷嗷嗷嗷嗷
是增强和准备两个动词平行，而不是表现和准备两个名词平行！一定记住从句意逻辑出发！！
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2022-01-14 16:07:11
angelfighting
c 项 performance 可以提高，但preparation不能用enhance，这个并列应该用语义排除
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2021-08-09 21:22:30
1110698asve
转发自Ron： choice C puts "performance" and "preparation" in parallel. the result is a sentence saying that this facility is meant to enhance performance and enhance preparation. that's the wrong meaning. the facility is geared toward enhancing performance ... and also toward preparing the athletes. in other words, the facility DIRECTLY "prepares" the athletes. it doesn't just "enhance their preparation". this should be clear in context. "geared to..." is also unidiomatic.
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2021-03-04 13:07:40
Dora6688
gear toward 表示aim at
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2021-02-22 15:56:14
Dora6688
and 前后平行
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2021-02-22 15:54:54
170452aahw
有跟动词原形噢 我查到了
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2020-10-19 18:32:26
179080rp
C中to enhance不能修饰athletes' performance 和 their preparation吗？这样athletes' performance 和 their preparation不也可以并列吗？怎么违反并列了？
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2020-08-19 03:11:28
Charlene0326回复179080rp
同问
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2020-09-09 17:56:38
241759www回复179080rp
gear sth/sb to/towards sth/sb
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2020-09-15 16:52:27
175886stkb回复179080rp
C是their的问题吧，句子中的任何一个地方athletes都不是主语，所以用their会指代到programs。
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2020-10-15 17:29:53
Bones
a complex是指代什么呀，我是看见有a才排除的CDE
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2020-05-15 13:34:00
693366dgol回复 Bones
refer to training center ; complex是綜合體育場
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2020-07-07 13:15:22
Stanley想去荷兰
AB：programs复数，主谓不一致 C考查主谓宾是否能搭配，enhance。。。their preparation，说不通 D.不平行
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2019-11-24 10:40:54
我也要700+
解释里对于平行解释错误，如下引用Manhattan 讲师： Please remember to use the first 5-8 words of the problem EXACTLY as your title: "The Sports Medicine Programs of..." If the meaning you want is "aimed at" (or the equivalent), use "gear toward" - so that's what we want, in this case. (You could also have a sentence that said, say, "I shipped my gear to her." That's a different meaning.) So, subj-verb eliminates A/B (is). Geared toward eliminates C. Parallelism eliminates D. (Geared toward X and Y.)
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2019-09-29 15:45:45
浪逐曲奇
不熟悉gear的idiom，但用平行可以做出来
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2019-09-28 17:59:03
750+
enhance 不能对preparation
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2019-09-24 12:19:30
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