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As a result of a supernova explosion, every human being on Earth was bombarded on February 23, 1987, by about 100 billion neutrinos; fortunately, neutrinos are harmless elementary particles that are produced in nuclear reactions and that interact very weakly with matter.
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当前版本由 与光同航 更新于2020-07-17 14:28:55 感谢由 与光同航 对此题目的解答所做出的贡献。考点：平行 逻辑语义
在划线部分前面是分号，说明划线部分后面是一个完整的句子；原句主干是neutrinos are particles，之后2个并列的由that引导的定语从句；
A 正确
B and后的which和which are harmless相隔太远，不能构成平行关系；
C and前后不平行
D and前后平行的是主句了，改变原句语义
E and省略，改变原句语义
句意：1987年2月23日，由于一次超新星爆炸，地球上的每一个人都被大约1000亿中微子轰击;幸运的是，中微子是无害的基本粒子，在核反应中产生，与物质的相互作用非常微弱。
思路分析：1.第一个that指代particles，第二个that也指代particles，句意表达通常，无语法错误。A暂时OK
2.which前边的主句无谓语动词，后面两个are，双谓语，排除B
3.which指代存在问题，指代不清，排除C
4.DE改了句意，重点强调的是中微子是无害的，而DE把它变成了修饰成分，重点强调是在核反应中产生的，不对，排除DE
angelfighting
b可以用平行结构排除，and which...，and前连接的句子没有which。 b也可以用语义排除，fortunately应该指的是neutrinos harmless这件事，而b选项which are harmless可以看作插入语不管，那这句话变成了fortunately，neutrinos are elementary particles... c选项and which...,平行结构错误 d e选项，these必须是前文提到过的，同时，原文是neutrinos are elementary particles, e选项是elementary particles are neutrinos, 虽然语义没改变，但这样的改写是illogical
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2021-07-31 11:11:00
170605ehvb
a项，neutrinos是particle；e项，particle是neurinos。意思改变
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2021-06-01 08:59:01
june27
a项，neutrinos是particle；e项，particle是neurinos。意思改变
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2021-04-14 16:12:50
康村冲冲冲
RON：(b) bad parallelism: are elementary particles... and which interact... (c) bad parallelism: are harmless elementary particles... and which interact... (d) illogical to place 'neutrinos' AFTER 'these ... particles' in the same sentence (this doesn't really change the meaning of the sentence; it's just an illogical pronoun reference) (e) same deal with interchanging 'these ... particles' and 'neutrinos'
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2020-08-14 10:49:16
hbhbh
D中these harmless elementary particles are produced in nuclear reactions，直接带过了harmless elementary, 但是本意应该是要强调这个小分子是没有害的（根据前文的fortunately可以推断）。
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2020-04-07 09:22:44
290421iszf
B 选项的are 两个谓语是不是重复了？
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2020-02-19 14:00:02
SelinaS回复290421iszf
没重复 第一个are在从句里 第二个are在主句里
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2022-08-24 18:46:52
847716opn
E these前面没有提到
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2019-10-04 10:22:36
夜空中最亮的星啦回复847716opn
是的
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2020-01-06 14:51:03
Joyce L
fortunately是关键，什么东西是fortunately，harmless，所以harmless不应该作为同位语
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2019-07-14 06:54:55
ty0121
为什么两个that是形容particles? 根据逻辑应该是neutrinos吧， 所以觉得A不好
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2019-02-14 22:39:50
217836h回复 ty0121
对呀 为什么...
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2021-11-09 10:51:31
默默
少数服从多数
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2018-05-08 04:02:40
默默回复默默
Ｂ排除
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2018-05-08 04:02:53
AUCHUI回复默默
少数服从多数是指哪部分呢？谢谢
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2018-10-14 14:12:54
消瘦大熊回复默默
别听她讲
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2019-07-21 10:26:50
落英缤纷
and that and that, 平行也适用于句子结构。另外，尽量不要改变语义。
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2018-04-21 14:39:16
天天都在树下
which不可以做限定修饰
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2018-01-05 11:37:23
cathyh
e选项，these elementary particles 因为these是代词，后面跟的名词必须是前文提到过的。很明显，前文提的是neutrinos 不是particles。
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2017-10-22 15:56:16
Anna_lee
note：平行 逻辑语义
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2016-06-08 17:58:55
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