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According to scientists who monitored its path, an expanding cloud of energized particles ejected from the Sun recently triggered a large storm in the magnetic field that surrounds Earth, which brightened the Northern Lights and also possibly knocking out a communications satellite.
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A，whihc就近修饰earth错
B，svo and it vo，it指代s，即cloud，逻辑错
C, 正确
D，主次关系和原文不一致
E，不简洁
499685skw
D中的brightened是修饰practicles还是large storm？有歧义；E的- ing修饰前面动词was triggered逻辑不对。
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2022-09-24 09:40:10
吃着香蕉开跑车
选C
A选项句子结构中which frightened...and knocking...不平行，且knocking不能作谓语，结构错误
B选项句子结构an expanding cloud was what...结构不简洁，且and it brightened and knocked和前面的句子并列，逻辑错误。翻译：据监测其路径的科学家们说，最近在地球周围的磁场中引发了一场巨大的风暴，并使北极光明亮，并可能摧毁了一颗通讯卫星。
C正确。翻译：据监测其路径的科学家称，一团不断膨胀的从太阳喷射出来的带电粒子云最近在围绕地球的磁场中引发了一场大风暴，点亮了北极光，可能还摧毁了一颗通讯卫星。
D选项particles ejected from the Sun信息丢失，且句子结构错误，a storm后无谓语动词
E选项particles ejected from the Sun信息丢失，且and it knocked这里做主句逻辑错误。翻译：根据监测其路径的科学家们的说法，最近，围绕地球磁场的一场大风暴，是由不断膨胀的带电粒子云所引发的，照亮了北极光，并它可能摧毁了一颗通讯卫星。
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2021-05-08 15:08:24
jy980404
提供一个新思路： 看未划线部分：monitored its path，可以推测出its path 指的是从cloud变成storm的过程，所以后面的主句必须是cloud 而不是storm，因此排除DE
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2020-10-31 12:10:01
Go800回复jy980404
对 而且是expanding的cloud，所以应该观察的是cloud，而不是storm。我以为是storm刚开始，是因为我经常看台风之类的报告 默认就是要来台风暴雨了，其实观察台风也是观察的台风眼的移动 而不是其结果暴雨的移动。
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2020-11-20 00:36:28
你这只猪
没注意到CD缺少文字，更一个严重的错误是我以为风暴照亮了北极和摧毁卫星，百度之后才知道是带电云团
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2020-07-21 17:07:55
1036912wrbwm回复你这只猪
我也是
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2020-11-12 08:21:25
746860xgow
B错在it指代不清
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2020-05-25 07:42:05
iu
A which修饰earth 错误 B it指代模糊 C 正确 DE 主语变成了storm
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2020-05-08 15:58:48
337016jipf
句意是：根据监测其路径的科学家，从太阳喷出的带电粒子的膨胀云最近在环绕地球的磁场中引发了一场大风暴，使北极光变亮，并可能敲晕通信卫星。句意判断是brightening这个动作应当是an expanding cloud因此排除CD。这是一个S+V,ing的形式，A B 如何排除其他网友有说，我就不讲了
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2019-12-09 16:27:14
windyy
brightening和knocking到底是修饰cloud还是strom？
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2019-10-12 21:51:52
425337g回复windyy
主语，就近的主谓关系或整句
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2019-11-04 17:32:22
不是你的回复windyy
strom
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2019-12-10 12:14:47
全智贤回复 windyy
这俩都不是。指的是整件事的结果。比如I ate an apple, contributing to my health. 这个contributing修饰的既不是I也不是apple，而是前面整句话带来的结果
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2020-02-08 16:10:59
AUCHUI
The timing and logical relationships among the events described in this sentence are of utmost importance. The scientists monitored a cloud ejected from the Sun. The cloud triggered a large storm, whose consequences were the brightening of the Northern Lights and the possible knocking out of a satellite. The latter two events are in a conjunction, so they should be represented by similar verb forms
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2018-12-26 18:45:27
Rofinia
D，E丢东西了
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2018-08-09 15:39:57
默默
DE句子中心改变
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2018-05-07 23:36:37
Joyce L
句首没有明显判断信息不好判断，先看后面看到了and、and also比较好判断
AB and also 单飞前面没有not only排除
DE and 前后不平行，C平行
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2017-11-12 14:38:15
Anna_lee
★平行结构
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2016-06-08 18:04:39
01ZX
主语cloud，谓语triggered，which句末结构做定语，and also possibly knocking。。平行结构。原文在这个平行结构上出现问题，brightened是which从句的谓语，而knocking只是现在分词，不具备谓语的特征，因此这两个词不能平行。因为划线部分比较长，因此需要逐一选项进行评价。
B选项主干是cloud was..可能出现定义错误，and连接两个句子，第二个句子主语it一般指代第一句主语即cloud，显然cloud brightened。。语义不符合常识。C选项brightening。。and knocking。。连个句末结构doing平行，句末结构doing表示伴随，是状语，可修饰句子的谓语，所以伴随或者结果。从语义来看，比较合适。D选项主干结构storm brightened the Northern Lights的语义违背原文。E选项and连接doing结构和一个句子，显然不符合平行原则。
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2015-11-22 12:15:19
心海
(A) which 从句修饰错误，而且brighten... and knock…没有平行 (B) was what 错 (D)和(E)中都丢失了信息：ejected from the Sun
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2015-07-19 20:33:30
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