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Many teenagers undergo stress, but results of a recent study indicate that the patterns of stress that girls experience are more likely to result in depression than are those that boys experience.

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are those that boys experience
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what boys experience
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boys' experience would
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boys' stress patterns do
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stress patterns of boys
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当前版本由 kisenana 更新于2021-11-26 13:34:28 感谢由 kisenana 对此题目的解答所做出的贡献。

选项A 正确 results of a recent study indicate that the patterns of stress that girls experience are more likely to result in depression than are those that boys experience. than之后需要倒装；those指代patterns ，THAN 前后 patterns are平行

选项B 缺少are；且 what从句不简洁

选项C 没有倒装错误，would错误，

选项D 没有倒装错误,do错误

选项E 缺少are

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499685skw

简化比较：the patterns of stress (of girls) are more likely... than the patterns of stress (of boys) are。是“the pattern of stress are"在做对比，助动词应该是are，所以选A。

0 0 回复 2022-10-05 22:55:20
499685skw回复499685skw

补充一点：是stress patterns that girls experienced 和 stress patterns that boy experienced 在做对比，不是单纯的stress patterns of boys（这种组合按英文逻辑也听起来怪怪的），所以E选项是不对的。

0 0 回复 2022-10-06 11:04:14

499685skw回复499685skw

呃，不，还是助动词的原因……

0 0 回复 2022-10-06 11:05:16

wordy要你吗

不可以D。恢复完整句可知道比较的是两个be likely 那只能用are来替代。
而are不能省略是因为如果省略会产生歧义。会变成，女孩更有可能经历男孩经历的depresssion

0 回复 2022-09-08 00:39:55

wordy要你吗

If we omit the verb, then the sentence would be:

Many teenagers undergo stress, but results of a recent study indicate that the patterns of stress that girls experience are more likely to result in depression than those that boys experience.

Or

Many teenagers undergo stress, but results of a recent study indicate that the patterns of stress that girls experience are more likely to result in depression than patterns of stress that boys experience.

This sentence can be misinterpreted as:

Many teenagers undergo stress, but results of a recent study indicate that the patterns of stress that girls experience are more likely to result in depression than (in) patterns of stress that boys experience.

In other words, the patterns of stress that girls experience are more likely to result

i) in depression than
ii) (in) patterns of stress that boys experience.

So, the patterns of stress that girls experience are more likely to result in depression; the patterns of stress that girls experience are less likely to result in patterns of stress that boys experience. However, this is clearly not the intended meaning.

0 回复 2022-09-08 00:20:00

Venni

平行结构中的比较句，正确句子应该是：patterns of stress that...are more likely to....than those that... are；然后are前置了
选错是因为没有理解透彻平行结构中的比较句

0 回复 2022-07-16 18:00:39

Venni

平行结构

0 0 回复 2022-07-16 16:54:34
Venni回复Venni

延申：【Authoritative parents are more likely than permissive parents to have children who as adolescents are self-confident, high in self-esteem, and responsibly independent.】 (A) Authoritative parents are more likely than permissive parents to have children who as adolescents are self-confident, high in self-esteem, and responsibly independent. (B) Authoritative parents who are more likely than permissive parents to have adolescent children that are self-confident, high in self-esteem, and responsibly independent. (C) Children of authoritative parents, rather than permissive parents, are the more likely to be self-confident, have a high self-esteem, and to be responsibly independent as adolescents. (D) Children whose parents are authoritative rather than being permissive, are more likely to have self-confidence, a high self-esteem, and be responsibly independent when they are an adolescent. (E) Rather than permissive parents, the children of authoritative parents are the more likely to have self-confidence, a high self-esteem, and to be responsibly independent as an adolescent.

0 0 回复 2022-07-16 17:07:46

ziqi

风中菜鸟
CD的错不在倒装，而是对比的成分不一致。前面的是the patterns of stress that girls experience，也后面也应该是the patterns of stress that boys experience或同样的逻辑表达。而C是boys' experience，D是boys' stress patterns，都是错的。

1 回复 2022-04-08 21:07:29

老风.

我觉得把A选项的are去掉也是对的？

0 回复 2022-01-20 11:01:02

477498gu

→(the patterns of stress) that boys experience are (likely to result in depression)
→those that boys experience are
→are those that boys experience

0 回复 2021-11-06 10:27:05

风中菜鸟

CD的错不在倒装，而是对比的成分不一致。前面的是the patterns of stress that girls experience，也后面也应该是the patterns of stress that boys experience或同样的逻辑表达。而C是boys' experience，D是boys' stress patterns，都是错的。

0 回复 2021-06-17 12:14:15

Anitaaaa

"patterns of stress that girls experience are more likely to result in" (depression than what boys experience."有歧义
Boys could be experiencing happiness

0 回复 2021-05-28 23:58:32

Ms Eh

比较前后：the patterns of stress that girls experience are 和 are those that boys experience
1. the patterns of stress对应those;
2. that girl experience 对应that boys experience;
3. Than后面倒装，将are 提前，还原应该是 the patterns of stress that boys experience are.

0 回复 2020-12-26 21:00:52

169605zpae回复Ms Eh

than 后面一定要倒装吗

1 0 回复 2022-03-15 17:44:29

1526888msts

BCE很容易排除。D项不能用do的原因：用了do意味着你想用它refer to “result”，充当一个linking verb。但是整个句子是在强调likelihood，即应该用A项的are来比较。如果用了do的话，就会造成前半句在讲一件事发生的likelihood，后半句在讲do的一个事实。所以不能用do，只能用are

0 回复 2020-12-05 19:33:37

1526888msts回复1526888msts

helping verb

0 0 回复 2020-12-05 19:34:56

175029gvqit

RON公开课20100513讲过，然后than后面是不一定要倒装的，HELPING VERB可以提前
- I can run faster than my bro.
- I can run faster than my bro can.
- I can run faster than can my bro.
以上都对

0 回复 2020-09-19 00:20:15

。。。？

倒装是为了定从前面就是先行词

0 回复 2019-10-20 01:33:07

Zhazha

the pattern of stress(that girls experience) are more likely to result in depression than the pattern of stress(that boy experience) are more likely to result in.
helping verb 是 are，不是result（do）
those 指代 the pattern of stress

0 回复 2019-09-26 17:05:35