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Recently documented examples of neurogenesis, the production of new brain cells, include the brain growing in mice when placed in a stimulating environment or neurons increasing in canaries that learn new songs.
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选项A：错误1：平行并列不对：one of the parallel structures says "mice when placed in a stimulating environment", but the other one says "canaries that learn new songs". Compare this to the parallelism in the correct answer choice, in which you have mice that do X and canaries that do Y. 错误2：example
选项B：第二个when后面they指代neurons错误
选项C：they指代不对
选项D：同D
PS：Tough one. "examples of neurogenesis include" - so the examples should lead off with whatever the actual thing is that indicated neurogenesis. The mice aren't the example - the example is the brain growth. That eliminates B and C.
landy720
而且感觉这里be placed in a stimulating enviroment和learn new things应该都是想要描述mice和canaries的属性，最好用定语从句，而不要用when引导的时间状语从句
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2022-07-03 17:29:50
313310tbyt
include作为补充说明前面production，一定不是ABC中的那些主语词，而应该是growth，做题的时候没有感觉到，D中用when引导时间状语的句子在语义上不太对，状语无法修饰mice，那么include的部分变为the brain growth in mice，那这个mice的状态可以是任意的， 而不是...状态下的老鼠的brain growth，语义是不不对的
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2022-03-24 16:42:37
水寒528
原文逻辑，例子包括。。。。。 A 脑子和神经元 B 老鼠和黄鹂 C 老鼠的脑子和黄鹂的神经元 D 脑子不能放在环境中 E 大脑的生长，黄鹂的增加，并且老鼠可以放在刺激的环境里，黄鹂也可以唱歌，逻辑正确
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2021-08-22 11:05:01
Audreyrey
when只能修饰动词和时间，AD错，examples of neurogenesis。猜测前面neurogenesis是一种神经元，不可能神经元包括mice，B错。意思上对比CE
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2021-01-14 19:43:10
Litchichi
Recently documented examples of neurogenesis, the production of new brain cells, 主语是 documented examples，但同时后面的同位语做了介绍，表示是新脑细胞的生产，也就是说 examples 记录的是新脑细胞产生的过程，是一个动态的过程；而 mice 和 canaries 只是两种动物，而 brain 也只是表示“大脑”，均不能表示一个动态过程，因此，都不属于本句的主语；只有 brain growth 和 an increase 才能表达这个动态的过程，选项E正确。
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2020-12-06 17:24:18
1272886aklo
我个人觉得when的意思是在那个环境下brain grow了，一拿出来就不grow了；that的意思是处于那个环境下的老鼠就会brain grow。稍微有一点侧重不一样？
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2020-10-20 18:54:56
1024804d回复1272886aklo
到位 placed in a stimulating environment做定语修饰老鼠比较合适，如果做时间状语的话，就是只有placed的时候include
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2020-11-16 20:49:13
cindayyy
D is wrong bc it compares mice and canaries’ neurons
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2020-09-29 10:02:26
康村冲冲冲
"examples of neurogenesis include" - so the examples should lead off with whatever the actual thing is that indicated neurogenesis. The mice aren't the example - the example is the brain growth. That eliminates B and C. A also breaks parallelism. And the other thing wrong with A, B, C and D is "when placed in a stimulating environment" - it sounds like they are referring only to the time that the mice are in the stimulating environment - but the brain growth is permanent. It doesn't shrink back down once the mice are no longer in the stimulating environment. Ditto for the increase in neurons in the canaries.
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2020-08-28 22:35:08
246324rbz
E选项brain growth不应该是单数吗为什么用are placed啊
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2020-02-23 01:47:18
243927tmbn回复246324rbz
that指代的是mice
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2020-03-14 17:19:49
wsysnbb
when还能修饰到前面examples我也是迷醉了。。。 原谅我真的没接触过这种神仙语法
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2019-12-19 23:48:56
243927tmbn回复wsysnbb
状语从句的省略结构
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2020-03-14 17:19:23
194422ntvbm回复wsysnbb
同迷醉
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2020-04-02 10:19:01
lgw75767
嗯
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2019-10-15 09:21:58
847716opn
D when的主语是examples错
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2019-10-03 21:57:51
我是李大爷呀
谁能告诉我这道题主句的谓语是哪个呀？迷
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2019-08-16 15:28:02
lemoon7回复我是李大爷呀
include
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2019-08-17 21:11:52
Karita
Ron 关于d 的解释，超棒！！ If you say "when + PAST PARTICIPLE", then this automatically applies to the SUBJECT of the clause to which it's attached. if i say iron accumulates rust when submerged in water then it's the iron, not the rust, that's submerged in water. this strikes choice (d), since the SUBJECT is "recently documented examples", not "mice" as required.
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2019-08-02 21:53:56
EvaBabe
canary....金丝雀！
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2019-07-21 22:21:19
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