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Originally developed for detecting air pollutants, a technique called proton-induced X-ray emission, which can quickly analyze the chemical elements in almost any substance without destroying it, is finding uses in medicine, archaeology, and criminology.
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A 【正确】 “Originally developed for detecting air pollutants”和“called proton-induced X-ray emission”正确地作定语就近修饰了“a technique”，“which can quickly analyze the chemical elements in almost any substance without destroying it”正确地就近修饰了“proton-induced X-ray emission”。“proton-induced X-ray emission” 含义并不仅仅是一种普通的“emission(放射)”，而是一种“technique(技术)”，因此可以被一个用来形容技术的定语从句修饰当前版本由 01**** 更新于2015-11-22 15:11:37 感谢由 01**** 对此题目的解答所做出的贡献。
B Originally developed for detecting air pollutants”是“a technique”的定语，两者之间插入了伴随状语“having the ability to analyze the chemical elements in almost any substance without destroying it”，构成了不必要的跳跃修饰，在GMAT考察的标准书面英语中，定语要尽量避免跳跃修饰。A优于B
C “called proton-induced X-ray emission”跳过“originally developed for detecting air pollutants”修饰名词“A technique”构成跳跃修饰。
D 同B
E 同B
主语technique, 谓语is finding。主语前有前置的状语，与主语有逻辑关系，没问题。插入部分主干也齐全。所以原文没有什么太大问题。
B 选项主语前有一个-ed分词开头的状语，一个doing开头的状语，俩状语无连词连接，结构错误。
C called proton-induced X-ray emission明显是修饰technique的，从原文都可以看出来，但是C选项把这俩部分隔的太远，除了that从句可以跳跃修饰，一般的定语修饰不能隔太远。
D 和C有一样的问题。
E 除了定语修饰隔太远的语义和结构错误外，还有一个特别明显的错误，and without，在前面找不到相对应的介词短语与之平行。
169647ndse
which不应该就近指代吗
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2023-05-31 18:03:37
499685skw
proton-induced X-ray emission就是那个technique，所以这个是可以analyze chemical elements的
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2022-10-09 11:33:33
662352yo
选项C的called 和 which 都有点指代不明。
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2022-09-02 11:47:51
我一定能杀G成功
之前看曼哈顿语法，修饰那一章节有提到过，如果两个修饰成分修饰一个名词，最好把名词放在中间，像A一样，这样主语和谓语不会隔得太远，逻辑上比较清晰。
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2022-07-24 10:39:48
Jennie在学习
回应一下01****对E的解析，and without...和quickly构成平行。E只是错在跳跃修饰。
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2020-08-14 16:37:14
981978cndam
GMAT考察的标准书面英语中，定语要尽量避免跳跃修饰
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2020-08-04 22:35:52
847716opn
B 两个状语之间没有连词连接
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2019-10-03 22:01:11
847716opn回复847716opn
尽量不要跳跃修饰
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2019-10-03 22:32:45
AUCHUI
C 如果改为 A technique originally developed for detecting air pollutants, proton-induced X-ray emission, which can quickly analyze the chemical elements in almost any substance without destroying it, 就对了吗？
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2018-10-19 16:03:42
1123
E选项缺少谓语
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2018-07-02 17:01:10
1123回复1123
看错了 不是这个原因
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2018-07-02 17:02:20
lchGMAT回复1123
但却是没谓语 少了be动词不是么
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2020-12-22 16:23:54
730以上
贴一下，网上看来的XDF的解释： A:bingo ; 修饰语被正确的放置，并断开; which发生跳跃指代，这句话的which不能修饰其紧邻的名词emission，必须跳过简短的分词修饰结构called …，修饰核心词technique;这里的developed …. Which 都是非限定性修饰，不能改为限定性修饰 ;限制性修饰和非限制性修饰一般也是不可以互换的，要搞清楚逻辑意思 B: 夹心修饰 having。。。。可以修饰前句，也可以修饰 a technique,GMAT认为是优先修饰前句 ; 修饰语+修饰语+加主句 错误 C: called proton-induced X-ray emission 应该紧跟a technique，并且不用逗号隔开 ，在这里就近修饰了pollutants; Which 指代了emission, 不合逻辑 ，中间修饰语太多，所以指代不到 a technique; D: called proton-induced X-ray emission 应该紧跟a technique ，并且没有逗号隔开，在这里就近修饰了pollutants; Which 指代了emission,不合逻辑 ，中间修饰语太多，所以指代不到 a technique;; has the ability to啰嗦; E：主谓离得太远了; called proton-induced X-ray emission 应该紧跟a technique，并且没有逗号隔开;has the ability to啰嗦;without destroying the substance重复两遍substance ;and without destroying 无并列对象;非限定性定从和限定性定从不能互换，A 中都是非限定性修饰 a technique ，这里变成了限定性。逻辑上不需要 总结：。 1.一个东西叫XXXX，这个XXXX往往 不能作为非限制性修饰成分， 就是called要紧跟他所修饰的词，不被逗号隔开 2.which 的跳跃指代： 当前面必须是一个 核心词+简短的修饰语+，which， which才能跳跃指代核心词;which不能跳过谓语动词指代主语 ;尽量不跳跃 3.主谓要比较靠近，但不能一味为了主谓靠近，就把各种introductory elements扔在句首，要找到平衡。<但是，把状语放于句首，再加一个与状语紧密关系的从句，这又是允许的> 4.夹心修饰：【，V-ing，】以及【,介词短语,】这两种结构，不知中间结构修饰前句还是后句，故夹心修饰。 5.can, able to, capable of doing的区分： 先说用法： can可以跟人，可以跟物，表达的是一种主观，"能或不能"; be able to一定程度上是可以和can互换的，看时态和用法; be capable of doing表示"客观的能/可以"，就是客观上"可不可以"，并不是主观上"能不能",主语可以是人可以是物。 其他用法：the ability of sb. to do sth. (一般情况啰嗦处理 ) capability of sb. to do/ of doing
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2018-01-27 19:26:33
stefan ye回复730以上
总能看到你的解释哦 你的解释都好好呀
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2018-07-14 11:28:23
Chancy520
1.一个东西叫XXXX，这个XXXX往往 不能作为非限制性修饰成分， 就是called要紧跟他所修饰的词，不被逗号隔开 2.which 的跳跃指代： 当前面必须是一个 核心词+简短的修饰语+，which， which才能跳跃指代核心词;which不能跳过谓语动词指代主语 ;尽量不跳跃 3.主谓要比较靠近，但不能一味为了主谓靠近，就把各种introductory elements扔在句首，要找到平衡。<但是，把状语放于句首，再加一个与状语紧密关系的从句，这又是允许的> 4.夹心修饰：【，V-ing，】以及【,介词短语,】这两种结构，不知中间结构修饰前句还是后句，故夹心修饰。 5.can, able to, capable of doing的区分： 先说用法： can可以跟人，可以跟物，表达的是一种主观，"能或不能"; be able to一定程度上是可以和can互换的，看时态和用法; be capable of doing表示"客观的能/可以"，就是客观上"可不可以"，并不是主观上"能不能",主语可以是人可以是物。 其他用法：the ability of sb. to do sth. (一般情况啰嗦处理 ) capability of sb. to do/ of doing
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