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As a baby emerges from the darkness of the womb with a rudimentary sense of vision, it would be rated about 20/500, or legally blind if it were an adult with such vision.
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当前版本由 01**** 更新于2015-11-08 23:47:11 感谢由 01**** 对此题目的解答所做出的贡献。A it指代不明
B or连接成分应该一直，“rated about 20/500”和“legally blind as an adult”逻辑含义上不对等，前者修饰“vision(视觉)”后者本意上不应修饰“vision(视觉)”而应修饰“a baby”，结构不平行
C 分号连接句法成分应该要平行，前后结构不平行
D 时态错误，would之后应连接动词原形，而不是过去式
考点：语法结构当前版本由 01**** 更新于2015-11-08 23:47:11 感谢由 01**** 对此题目的解答所做出的贡献。
本句中的第一个it应该指代sense of vision
A it指代不明
B 最后结束的地方缺少一部分，造成句子错误
C 分号连接的句子成分要一致，但是题目中不平行
D 正确
E which引导的从句使用不符合英语表达方式。
考点：语法结构当前版本由 小黄人 更新于2018-09-15 05:30:41 感谢由 小黄人 对此题目的解答所做出的贡献。
本句中的第一个it应该指代sense of vision
A it指代不明
B 最后结束的地方缺少一部分，造成句子错误
C 分号连接的句子成分要一致，但是题目中不平行
D 正确
E which引导的从句使用不符合英语表达方式。
当前版本由 滴滴冲冲冲 更新于2020-03-17 01:25:02 感谢由 滴滴冲冲冲 对此题目的解答所做出的贡献。from xdf：
(A)As a baby emerges from the darkness of the womb with a rudimentary sense of vision, it would be rated about 20/500, or legally blind if it were an adult with such vision.
【错误】 代词指代：“it would be rated about 20/500”中的“it”本意上指代“a rudimentary sense of vision”和“it were an adult with such vision”中的“it”指代“a baby”，在GMAT考察的标准书面英语中，同类代词在句子中反复出现时利用指代同物(人)，否则指代不明。因此本选项中代词指代不明。
(B)A baby emerges from the darkness of the womb with a rudimentary sense of vision that would be rated about 20/500, or legally blind as an adult.
【错误】 平行结构：“rated about 20/500”和“legally blind as an adult”逻辑含义上不对等，前者修饰“vision(视觉)”后者本意上不应修饰“vision(视觉)”而应修饰“a baby”——“视觉”不应与“作为成年人是盲人”搭配，因此两者不应中“or”培训在一起。
(C)As a baby emerges from the darkness of the womb, its rudimentary sense of vision would be rated about 20/500; qualifying it to be legally blind if an adult.
【错误】 平行结构：“;”两边应连接语法功能对等的结构，在本选向中“;”前边是主谓机构“its rudimentary sense of vision would be rated about 20/500”，而后方则是“qualifying it to be legally blind if an adult”，一个不是主谓结构的特殊结构。
(D)A baby emerges from the darkness of the womb with a rudimentary sense of vision that would be rated about 20/500; an adult with such vision would be deemed legally blind.
【正确】 本选项避免使用代词，从而避免了指代不明的问题。分号正确地连接了两个平行的主谓结构。
【大意】 婴孩从子宫的黑暗中出来时有可被评级为20/500的基本视觉;一个有如此视觉的成年人会被按标准认定为盲人。
(E)As a baby emerges from the darkness of the womb, its rudimentary sense of vision, which would deemed legally blind for an adult, would be rated about 20/500.
【错误】 动词时态：“would”之后应连接动词原形，而不是过去式的“deemed”。
本句中的第一个it应该指代sense of vision
A it指代不明
B 最后结束的地方缺少一部分，造成句子错误
C 分号连接的句子成分要一致，但是题目中不平行
D 正确
E 应该是would be deemed
981978cndam
B里面最后变成 vision be legally blind。vision不能是blind的，baby才能blind
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2020-08-04 21:34:45
Junwei
irst of all, only people can be deemed as blind. A sense of vision can be rated, but it can not be deemed as blind. So rule out choices A,B,and E.In choice C, the words after the semicolon form a sentence fragment.
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2019-11-25 00:34:57
Shirley小可爱
个人看法：A,两个it指代不同，第一个it指vision，第二个指baby； B，注意谁是legally blind,不可能是vision blind，肯定是人blind；而且我觉得这里‘comma modifier’有歧义，可能修饰的是baby emerges(or legally blind)，也可能是vision that would be rated(or legally blind); C,分号后面不是句子； E，which不对，用which指的是vision be deemed blind,但本意是adult be deemed blind 关于题中的as，好像从语义上讲只有as表示duration（while）才对，但时态好像不太对，如果是表示while，就不应该前面是emerges后面是would be
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2019-11-03 09:56:39
Ahhhhhow
实在搞不清楚，就全部翻译成中文，排序
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2019-08-24 23:19:04
奔跑的小猪呀
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2018-12-27 14:30:54
Sherry88897
这里的it不存在指代不清的问题，因为国外baby在很小的时候就称呼为lt，不分性别
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2018-12-21 18:29:33
emoji呀
The pronoun thing isn’t an issue anymore, but the meaning is still warped: “… a rudimentary sense of vision that would be… legally blind as an adult.” The vision wouldn’t be legally blind; the baby would. (B) is out, too.
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2018-08-28 09:33:02
小爱奈
因为it可能指代baby，所以it指代不清 其实我觉得as有问题，as这里不论作“因为”还是作“随着”，都不对
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2018-08-22 21:22:29
默默
高清逻辑关系
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2018-05-07 23:59:44
默默回复默默
E没有主句
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2018-05-08 01:38:30
默默回复默默
ABC逻辑关系错误
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2018-05-08 01:45:32
xxxxada回复 默默
E有主句的…… its rudimentary sense of vision would be rated about 20/500.
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2018-06-09 15:35:04
羊羊羊羊羊
E的错难道不是it不能指a baby嘛
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2018-03-30 15:32:07
默默回复羊羊羊羊羊
Ｅ的句子中心改变
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2018-05-07 23:59:59
Bonivanee回复羊羊羊羊羊
it可以时代baby啊 在英语习惯里性别不明可以用it指代
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2018-10-01 19:41:55
fuksurgen
E有几个错误 一个是its指代不明 一个是would deem 错误 还有一个是baby的出生和rate这两个动作不是同时发生的 所以不能用As
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2018-01-21 21:11:37
fuksurgen回复fuksurgen
还有which 隔开了version和rated 使得意思错误 原意是 version rated XXXX 对成年人是盲的
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2018-01-21 21:20:02
CU
B 最后结束的地方缺少一部分，造成句子错误 怎么解释？ 缺少什么？ 公用vision后面的would be不可以吗？ vision that would be legally blind as an adult.
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2017-12-31 10:53:17
Adam.W回复CU
我觉得b错在 vision ....as an adult. 视觉是不能作为一个成年人的
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2018-02-28 09:20:57
blalalala
我觉得E中which引导的非限制性定语从句的先行词不是vision（不指rated 20/500这个vision本身），而是前面整个主语部分（baby's vision），所以which引导的这个句子就不能表达这个视力水平在成人身上怎么怎么样的意思了
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2017-11-28 13:55:45
brukie
E which引导的从句使用不符合英语表达方式。这是什么意思啊
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2017-02-01 12:24:20
Alexavier回复brukie
同问！！！不就是修饰前面rudimentary sense of vision的定语从句吗？？？
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2017-04-30 11:54:24
生如夏花回复brukie
E which修饰的是redimentary sense of vision, 这个vision本身并非legally blind for an adult,而是rated about20/500,才是legally blind for an adult.
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2017-06-12 23:08:37
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