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The cottontail rabbit population in Orange County, California, has increased unchecked in recent years as a result of the removal of the native fox population and the clearing of surrounding woodlands.
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选项分析：A：correct，the removal和后半部分的the clearing平行，as a result修饰正确合理
B：removing不平行
C：the removing of表达不优，有自己的名词形式就用名词形式而不是动名词
D：which就近修饰years不符合语义，removing不平行
E：which使用不正确
hints：注意根据未划线部分的平行判断该使用哪一种形式，which一般修饰就近名词
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错选C，感谢评论解释，我认为可以从以下两点排除C。1）resulting from只能做定语修饰名词 不能做原因状语，不能做副词修饰 2）曼哈顿中提过，svo，doing结构往往是前因后果，而result from表示起因于，那么就是前果后因，显然不对。而A选项as result of直接是介词结构做状语，修饰increase这个动词。
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2021-11-28 14:54:25
Audreyrey
C是svo，doing的结构，但是result from不能这样用 1） the pollution （resulting from the chemical spill ）forced all the local residents to evacuate.（正确，定语修饰名词pollution） 2）The cottontail rabbit population in California has increased in recent years, resulting from the removing of a and the clearing of b.(错误，不能做状语修饰动词increased）
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2021-01-13 22:13:58
Lllllllla
RON说，removal of fox的话更强调这件事本身——FOX被remove这件事；如果是他the removing of fox更强调人去remove这些fox，显然这里不是。
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2019-11-05 14:19:01
Karita
RON：(2) first removal is better. there are a bunch of words like these, with specific noun forms that, simply because they exist, are considered better than the corresponding gerund (-ing) forms. notable among this class of nouns are the '-al' forms, like removal, betrayal, etc. unfortunately, there are no general tips of the form you're soliciting; such are the joys of the english language. the closest i can get to a general rule is this: if a special noun form exists, use it. if not, use the -ing form. as for your examples above, you wouldn't want 'removing' because removal is a better substitute. clearing, though, is fine because there's no specially designated noun form for that one. (1) you can't use 'resulting from' as an adverbial modifier, as is done here. in general, 'resulting from' is only used as an adjective modifier, almost always without a comma, as in the pollution resulting from the chemical spill forced all the local residents to evacuate.
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2019-08-01 10:29:14
Joyce L
clearing名词，林中空地
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2019-07-19 08:31:42
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曼哈顿说resulting from只能做定语修饰名词 不能做原因状语，不能做副词修饰
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2019-07-09 11:35:37
JCLEE
B的问题不是什么优不优于，我认为是两点。 1. 最大问题，removing不能和the clearing平行，removal作为一个action noun和the clearing这个complex gerunds平行 2. 个人观点，如果改成removing和clearing两个动作平行，意思也有点尴尬，做remove和clear动作的主语在哪里
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2019-02-10 16:22:09
JCLEE
B的问题在于removing不能和后面的The clearing平行，如果后面是clearing，就可以
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2019-02-10 16:18:09
科科D
是可以考虑后半句平行的，曼哈顿里面说过action noun （removal）是可以和 complex gerunds（前面加定冠词的动名词 - the clearing）平行的。
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2019-01-31 15:06:29
Kath1230
不要改变原句意，as a result of。。。是由于。。。的原因， resulting表示伴随 同时发生了。。改变了原句意
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2019-01-23 00:55:13
汪二喵
，ving结构要按照发生顺序，或者因果关系，resulting，，，发生早于主句，也不是由前一句导致，位置错误了
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2018-11-28 10:47:59
汪二喵回复汪二喵
名词可以与复杂动名平行
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2018-12-05 10:54:31
Karina
想问一下为什么这边不考虑removing和clearing平行的问题？
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2018-10-15 12:59:00
雷哥的司机回复Karina
因为和clearing平行的是removal，这两个才是词义和形式上的平行，而不是removing和clearing.因为removing在这里相当于是现在分词形式并不是名词形式，但clearing却是名词形式
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2018-11-24 15:55:25
GMAT考零蛋
后面是the clearing
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2018-09-10 04:37:09
dirtywayne
坑！
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2018-08-26 18:57:43
s
话说同跟词，不应该是动词好于形容词好于名词嘛
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2017-11-21 19:21:34
默默回复s
removal 强调结果，状态；removing强调动作
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2018-05-06 10:30:02
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