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Each year companies in the United States could save as much as $58 billion annually by preventing illness among employees and gain as much as $200 billion through improving performance of workers if they simply provided offices with cleaner air.
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原句句子结构：companies could save $58 billion by preventing illness among employees and gain $200 billion through improving performance of workers if they simply provided offices；
原句想要表达的逻辑语义：公司每年能够省下58$ billion，通过在雇员中预防疾病；公司每年能得到200￥billion通过提高员工的表现，如果员工被提供有清新空气的办公室；
ABC:Each year和annually逻辑语义重复，排除；
D:原句的状语关系是：方式状语，用by来表示；这里用in prevention 来表示不符合gmat习惯，动词优于名词；
E:句意没有问题
ziqi
improved worker performance是名词 improve不做动词
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2022-06-13 15:26:54
223699noe
D：in的语义是在什么方面省钱（不平行），应该是通过什么方式省钱（和and后面语义平行）
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2021-11-09 16:33:27
279790ozqw
It's nonsense, because "$xxxx in yyyyy" would mean that yyyy is something that can actually be measured in dollars. E.g., By driving a hybrid car, I will save thousands of dollars in fuel costs. Your business can save over $10,000 per month in shipping costs by using XYZ Courier Service.
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2021-09-15 11:19:59
Monicayi
each year和annually语义重复排除ABC； DE比较，D选项的in employee illness prevention不能表示“通过某种方式”，and前后都应该是通过某种方式节约钱，排除D； E选项虽然是by doing和through+名词，但是都表示“通过某种方式”，语义平行上比D优，所以选E
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2021-08-25 16:55:11
319713blxo
为啥E选项的by preventing和though improved worker performance简单动名词可以和名词平行呀
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2021-01-22 15:42:26
可欣同学
annually 与 each year 重复，排除ABC。。。D中的they指代不明确。
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2020-10-17 18:04:56
小良冠二郎
By... and through...也算是平行結構，不一定死板地認為是by... and by...
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2020-09-27 16:56:05
康村冲冲冲
Manhattan: Here are the only words that differentiate (D) and (E): (D) in employee illness prevention .....improving performance of workers... (E) by preventing illness among employees .... improved worker performance... I think this choice boils down to idiom, although parallelism could be useful: (D) reads "companies could save $58B in X...and gain $200B through Y" The phrasing "save $ in X" is not ideal...the only correct usage of this I can think of is "save $ in banks" (i.e. to specify location of saved money). That is not the purpose here. (E) reads "companies could save $58B by preventing X...and gain $200B through Y" where the correct idiom "save $ by doing X" (i.e. to specify how money is saved) is used. Also, X and Y are parallel nouns (illness and performance) correctly completing the idioms "by preventing X (one thing) ...and through Y (some other thing)"
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2020-08-31 17:13:17
jq123
agreement问题，看到they it要时刻想指代什么，D选项最后的they可能指代workers，而实际却指代companies
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2019-12-05 14:01:48
Joyce L
Serena解析说D的and前后不平行，我觉得是平行的呀 DE的其中一个区别是save in/by，看到一个比较好的解释是save money in sth (从某处省钱) 和 save money by sth （通过某处省钱），供参考
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2019-07-22 03:03:09
917410回复Joyce L
我觉得这个好像是最有道理的解释
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2019-09-14 14:12:33
奔跑的小猪呀回复 Joyce L
不平行，一个是表示方式，一个是表示省钱的地方，语义不平行
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2019-12-26 15:30:49
160080wvro回复Joyce L
同意
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2020-11-10 23:27:10
阿星啊阿星
D选项真正的问题在于1、they指代不清，既可以指companies也可以指workers 2、改变了句意，原意是通过避免疾病来节约钱，D选项开头的in employee illness prevention是做句子状语修饰整个句子，没有“通过、凭借”的意思
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2019-04-16 15:01:53
Futurewinner
each year和annually 意思重复复，只保留一个即可。排除ABC D 改变了原句语义。原句是说公司通过便面员工生病从而公司节省了58billion, 而该选项是说公司在防止员工方面节省了58 billion. 另外D中的workers是名词，if后面的they指代不清楚，是指待主语companies还是workers？语义上应该是指companies,但是语法结构上没能清楚地表达。 而E答案中的worker是形容词性，因而if后面的they毫无疑问是指代主语companies.避免了D的问题，且逻辑语义没有问题。
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2019-03-12 01:37:15
Kath1230
【Each year】 companies in the United States could 【save】 as much as $58 billion annually 通过某种方式by preventing illness among employees and 【gain】 as much as $200 billion 通过某种方式by preventing illness among employees and gain as much as $200 billion through 【improved worker performance】improved worker performance做名词 if 【they】指代前面的companies simply provided offices with cleaner air. 前面已经有了each year，所以后面用annually就重复了！！
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2019-02-16 22:51:23
HoggieT
建议整个网站封杀那个叫默默的人，这哥们儿在每道题下面胡说八道，误导别人，寄希望于让别人考差了降低自己的竞争难度。
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2019-01-22 10:55:27
917410回复HoggieT
哈哈哈哈暴躁老哥
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2019-09-14 14:11:59
GMAT750进LSE回复HoggieT
哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈，我第一次回复，你这个太有意思了
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2019-10-05 15:43:29
carmen97
$xxx in yyy，yyy必须是cost 例如，save $100 in the driving costs 而通过zzz手法来省钱，应该用by doing 如save $100 in the driving costs by walking
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