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A firm that specializes in the analysis of handwriting claims from a one-page writing sample that it can assess more than 300 personality traits, including enthusiasm, imagination, and ambition.
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A.It指代不清，排除。当前版本由 01**** 更新于2015-11-23 14:01:39 感谢由 01**** 对此题目的解答所做出的贡献。
B.It指代不清，排除。
C.The ability of doing搭配错误，排除。
D.Be able todo，正确，简洁。
Being风险，整个选项结构混乱，排除。
当前版本由 Veronica 更新于2016-06-02 21:34:04 感谢由 Veronica 对此题目的解答所做出的贡献。主语firm, 后是that定语从句修饰，定语从句谓语是specializes，主句谓语是claims，后是宾语从句that。。，从句主语是it 谓语是can assess。原文结构没有问题，那么需要考虑的主要问题是语义。
比较选项差异，发现from a one-page writing sample的位置有变化，那么我们从这个位置的变化考虑语义的严谨和简介。
A 和CD的差异是从一张writing sample，它能assess ，还是它能从一张writing sample进行assess，显然第二个语义比较合理严谨，因此排除A。
B 肯定可以排除，因为句子结构错了。
CD的差别，有动词able和名词ability的差别，显然动词表达具体的动作比名词表达笼统的概念要严谨，因此排除C
D 正确
E不符合claim的一般用法，排除。
当前版本由 263050fvnt 更新于2020-12-08 09:27:56 感谢由 263050fvnt 对此题目的解答所做出的贡献。A 的语义是：通过a one-page writing sample，claim that..语义错误。通过one-page writing sample来评估300种性格，似乎更为合理。
ability of doing 是合理的。但一般是claim to do..没有claim sth.
为什么D那么难看，A那么好看。我还要选D？因为GMAT考的是逻辑语义。A 选项表示公司从一张sample上面claim一件事，D选项表示从一张sample可以access到不同信息，即可以从一张sample完成这件事情。现在我们考虑是从这张纸claim合理还是从这张纸得出各种信息合理？显然是信息啊。要抓住人家想要表达的意思，不要自己用什么it指代做题，越做越废，因为代词用法永远不是固定的。
499685skw
A选项的it指代模糊；D选项的to be able to do sth是正确的结构。
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2022-10-08 20:43:31
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A选项还以为句子是用了倒装……显然表达a firm 有什么ability还是用to be able to do sth更直接。
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2022-10-08 20:45:35
听雪楼下堆雪人
语义，宣称，在给一页手写例子后，能评价出超过300个个人的特点， 包括...and.. C宣称一种能力，关于评价 可改为the ability of assess personality traitrs more than 300 D宣称能去评价 be able to do
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2019-09-29 02:11:45
Karita
(A)from a one-page writing sample that it can assess 【错误】 句子意思：“from a one-page writing sample”本意上是“assess”的状语，合起来表意为“从一页书写样本中评估出(人格特征)”，那么为了修饰“assess”，“from a one-page writing sample”本应与其处于同一个主谓结构内，也就是“that”之后的从句中，而不是出现在“that”之前的主句中。 (B)from a one-page writing sample it has the ability of assessing 【错误】 句子意思：“it has the ability of assessing……”和“claims”之间的“that”被省略了，在GMAT考察的标准书面英语中，长难句的that最好不要省略。不仅如此，选项省略“that”之后“from a one-page writing sample”在语法上有修饰“claims”的可能，表达出“从一页书写样本中宣布”的不合理含义，而其本意上要修饰“accessing”，因此本选项表意不明确。 (C)the ability, from a one-page writing sample, of assessing 【错误1】固定搭配：不存在“ability of doing sth.”表达“有能力做某事”的用法。 【错误2】 句子意思：类似地，见(B)中“句子意思”，“from a one-page writing sample”本意上要修饰“accessing”，但这一预期的修饰关系并未明确建立。 (D)to be able, from a one-page writing sample, to assess 【正确】 正确使用了“to be able to do sth.”的固定搭配，“from a one-page writing sample”正确地作状语修饰了动词“assess”(状语不仅可以用来修饰谓语动词，还可用来修饰非谓语动词)。由于“including(包括)”不是一般意义的动词现在分词形式而是一种特殊介词，逗号加“including”属于特殊用法，这种结构无论出现在句中还是句尾均用来修饰名词，表示被修饰名词概念“包括”的内容。 【大意】 一个专门分析手写字的公司宣称有能力从一页书写样本中评估300项人格特征，包括热情、想象力和志向。 (E)being able to assess, from a one-page writing sample 【错误】 固定搭配：不存在“claim being able to”的用法。 【最优解题思路推荐】 围绕“from a one-page writing sample”的修饰关系进行语义分析，(A)、(B)、(C)表意不明，排除。 即便不知道“claim being able to”是错的，也可以根据“being”相对不简洁排除(E)，因此选择(D)。
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2019-07-30 16:35:11
carolnw
Claim to do不是non-idiom的吗？
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2019-03-26 15:11:32
aoiki
Be able to do原来不是只有人可以用啊
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2019-02-23 21:12:35
ziyuanguo
A错的原因是 从一页...可以assess 修饰的是assess 应该在that从句里面 放在外面修饰的是claim
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2019-01-13 11:30:33
katty000
A项中的it对前文指代不清。
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2018-11-07 14:16:07
发呆的夜之亡魂
ability of doing 是不合理的，曼哈顿上已经指出只有ability to do是争取的
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2018-07-02 10:26:06
饼先生
只能用ability to do sth 而不能是 ability of doing sth！
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2018-05-25 20:43:18
默默
claim to do 为一般的搭配方法
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2018-05-02 05:26:40
阿婉会有720
Ron说过不要太纠结指代不清 看到代词后 看一下它有没有可以指代且指代合理的对象即可 这道题不觉得指代是考点 it可以指代firm 也确实应该指代firm 根据语法规则 从句中放在主语处的代词倾向于指代主句中的主语 A错在逻辑语义
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2017-09-02 14:17:31
Vera0503
it的指代不清是个大考点啊。。。
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2016-10-31 21:02:39
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