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Sales of wines declined in the late 1980s, but they began to grow again after the 1991 report that linked moderate consumption of alcohol, and particularly of red wine, with a reduced risk of heart disease.

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they began to grow again after the 1991 report that linked moderate consumption of alcohol, and particularly of red wine, with a reduced risk of heart disease
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after the 1991 report that linked a reduced risk of heart disease with a moderate alcohol consumption, particularly red wine, they began growing again
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in a 1991 report, moderate alcohol consumption, and particularly of red wine, which was linked with a reduced risk of heart disease, caused them to begin to grow again
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with a reduced risk of heart disease linked in a 1991 report with moderate alcohol consumption, in particular red wine, they began growing again
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a reduced risk of heart disease linked to moderate alcohol consumption in a 1991 report, and in particular red wine, started them growing again
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当前版本由 BJ**** 更新于2016-03-10 17:03:35 感谢由 BJ**** 对此题目的解答所做出的贡献。

可以用but前后不平行直接干掉

虽然A也不是特别好，but平行主语一样的话不是省略主语会更好嘛，但是没有更好的了，就选A

当前版本由 abccccccc 更新于2016-03-30 11:23:55 感谢由 abccccccc 对此题目的解答所做出的贡献。

考点：逻辑语义

原句语义：红酒销量下降，但是在1991之后再次回升，因为有相关的报道关于酒的消费，尤其是红酒，可以降低心脏疾病风险。

A 正确

B with a moderate alcohol consumption，particularly red wine中，consumption和red wine不是同一概念；错误

C and前后不平行

D 同B,consumption和red wine不是同一概念

E and前后不平行；

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选项(b)的主要问题是以下修饰语结构:“…如果你要使用同位修饰语(基本上，逗号+名词)，那么同位修饰语必须描述逗号左侧的内容。这在这里是不存在的:“(particularly) red wine”不是“alcohol consumption”的例子。请注意，这是an example of alcohol itself，而not an example of alcohol consumption. 。
另一方面，请注意正确答案中的修饰语用“particularly of red wine”来绕过这个问题。这一次，它确实描述了consumption of alcohol

0 回复 2022-01-08 10:05:01

sql回复我希望杀G成功！

好细心

0 0 回复 2022-04-27 12:19:49

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只能说A虽然不好，但也能接受，但B的考点是同位语，此处就不对。诶！

0 回复 2021-12-29 13:45:40

孙笑川

CDE选项 一旦加入in... with...便改变了原句的句意 至于B 适度饮酒这一概念并不等于红酒 因此被排除 选A

0 回复 2018-11-16 12:11:33

song777

A中and particular 对吗。。。为什么要加and

0 0 回复 2018-09-18 20:49:06
AUCHUI回复song777

和consumption of alcohol 平行，可以直接理解为consumption of red wine

0 0 回复 2018-10-19 16:42:00

fuksurgen

the main issue with choice (b) is the following modifier construction:
"... moderate alcohol consumption, particularly red wine, ..."

if you're going to use an appositive modifier (basically, comma + NOUN), then the appositive modifier must actually describe what is to the left of the comma.
this doesn't happen here: "(particularly) red wine" is not an example of "alcohol consumption". note that it's an example of alcohol itself, but not an example of alcohol consumption.

for more details about these appositive modifiers, check out the study hall recording for september 23 at the following link:
http://www.manhattangmat.com/thursdays-with-ron.cfm

--

on the other hand, notice that the modifier in the correct answer circumvents this issue by using "particularly of red wine". this time, this is something that really does describe consumption of alcohol, rather than alcohol itself -- consumption of red wine.

0 回复 2018-01-22 01:09:24

1123回复fuksurgen

B选项的正解！

0 0 回复 2018-07-02 16:01:15
laurenluyun回复fuksurgen

棒！！！

0 0 回复 2019-03-16 17:11:18

曼迪小朋友

moderate consumption of alcohol and particularly of red wine，一般来说alcohol是包括red wine的，单是这两个是不可以用and连接表平行的，但是这里加了particularly使得这个成立了。Ron举例说明了：
hemingway's books were not as famous as hemingway himself.
如果没有himself书和人是不可以比较的，但是为了使比较成立加了himself。
另外，这里的and前加逗号是语气/修辞问题：
here are lots and lots and lots and lots of exceptions to punctuation "rules" -- mostly based on rhetorical concerns (emphasis, irony, etc.).
fortunately, punctuation is NOT tested on the gmat.
我们应该先主要考虑句意。不要凭借标点符号这些快速地排除选项。虽然我也做错了……o(*￣︶￣*)o

0 回复 2017-12-08 23:42:15

奋斗的小汤圆

A为啥要[and] particularly...

0 0 回复 2017-11-15 19:22:18

Lily730

B red wine和alcohol consumption概念不同，不能同位修饰，应该在red wine后面补上consumption; they离 sales太远，使句子理解不清晰
C which指代red wine错误，particularly of red wine和moderate alcohol consumption不平行；cause 的主语是consumption逻辑意思很荒谬，正确的主语应该是report
D with独立主格的核心名词是a reduced risk of heart disease risk,用它来伴随they began growing不对；red wine不能修饰alcohol consumption
E in a 1991 report 错误滴修饰moderate alcohol consumption,好像 consumption 发生在report里，link to搭配不对
所以选A

0 回复 2017-08-30 13:52:08