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Although appearing less appetizing than most of their round and red supermarket cousins, heirloom tomatoes, grown from seeds saved during the previous year--they are often green and striped, or have plenty of bumps and bruises—heirlooms are more flavorful and thus in increasing demand.
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ACE选项: S，SVO 结构错误。
B选项：正确。
D选项：没有让步关系，没有although这个连词，直接导致run on。
句子结构：双破折号属于插入语，添加之后对其他部分的句子结构不造成任何影响。因此将这一部分删去后考察句子结构，发现“heirloom tomatoes appear less appetizing……”与“heirlooms are more flavorful……”两个主谓结构之间没有任何分句连接词，因此这两个结构的连接方式有问题。
419716gjbb
双破折号的插入语在解释说they are often green and striped…，所以前面应该主要是在描述heirloom tomatoes的长相，插入语之后的句子才是主句内容，所以插入语前面的只能用从句或者修饰语。
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2021-12-16 10:02:04
419716gjbb回复419716gjbb
补充理解：C: heirloom tomatoes, grown from seeds... 在后面后面作为同位语没必要，直接当主语就好了，不然容易歧义以为是supermarket cousins的就近同位语
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2021-12-16 10:08:37
努力上进xbq
A 逻辑错误，原句语义应为： 虽然heirloom tomatoes，用前一年保存的种子种植的，比其他西红柿看起来没有食欲——青色有条纹 磕磕碰碰的——但是heirloom更好吃所以需求增加。
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2021-12-02 23:05:59
不到740不分手
后面分号应该改成破折号，否者就没有选项。
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2021-06-24 14:55:35
卿卿绿草mua~
符号打错了吧 应该是“—”打成“；”用法就不一样了欸 怎么做的对？！
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2020-12-22 19:30:16
LO1S
音频解析怎么会这么烂
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2020-09-29 15:34:37
524117zyta回复LO1S
有一说一确实
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2021-03-24 20:38:34
174119imim
什么是双主语问题？ 可以举个例子吗
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2020-05-18 01:22:29
172722kezia
C.中appear不就是谓语嘛？为什么说C的although句中没有谓语？
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2020-02-17 10:38:30
小丁今天杀鸡了吗回复172722kezia
前半句可以看做是修饰 heirloom tomatos的，真正的主语 heirloom tomatos没有谓语
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2020-02-20 18:41:38
可欣同学回复172722kezia
是主句没有谓语动词
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2020-11-27 11:10:03
想养一只博美
破折号后面的they并不是指cousins,因为这个they后面接着的修饰内容是“green and striped”,而cousins在前面已经有了修饰，就是“round and red”，所以句意本身形成的对比是supermarket cousins 是又圆又红的，而h tomatoes则是绿色有瘀的，所以做题的重点在于要找出能把破折号后面的they和h tomatoes能够对上的选项。因此综合选项：A—缺谓语；B—把中间修饰省略主句为“Although h tomatoes……they”，可以对上，正确；C—主角缺谓语；D—句子tone变更；E：主句缺谓语。
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2019-11-01 17:00:26
187212n
问一个题外话，想知道为什么是grown而不是growing？HT不应该是主动发出生长这个动作吗？
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2019-09-12 17:54:06
炸鸡块回复187212n
grow 也有做直接及物动词表示使生长和种植 这里用的应该是这个词性
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2019-12-16 00:56:14
158706lvuy回复187212n
感觉这里的grown是在描述一个状态，就是已经完成成长的状态
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2019-12-31 11:27:37
dGee
首先根据they are often green and striped判断，前面肯定是cousins，不可能是year,排除AC 再来，从句也有主谓宾的，所以E排除 D：逻辑都给变了，没有了让步的意思，也错
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2019-09-01 22:19:16
EscapeFromFate
考的是破折号后面对前面的解释，只有B选项是符合考点的，其他都没法对上they are often green and striped...
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2019-01-18 16:10:02
蓝莓提子
重点 1看出ace的前半句，都是状语，不是句子，所以就和后面的h形成双主语的一个句子！一个句子！ 2 d的话，是2句话，但是没有连词，所以错误，这也是考点
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2019-01-16 20:58:49
387456kals回复蓝莓提子
d是两句话？第一句有主谓宾结构吗？眼瞎？
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2021-03-22 11:30:00
爱学习的小可爱
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2018-12-10 15:10:52
孙笑川
这个题实际依据语意做更快 这个原题带有转折含义 虽然这种番茄较少地引起食欲 但是口味丰富需求增长 一定要看句子的重心在哪
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2018-11-16 17:15:54
Jiamu
或者是去找decision point，抛开语法来说，a选项，两个对比不平等，appearing less appetizing和most of their两个不对等。c选项they不知道指代是谁。d选项，逻辑含义被改变， although表示即使。。。e选项两个逗号之间的是modifier，你会发现主主谓宾。 这是我的看法。
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2018-10-09 11:39:45
Jiamu回复Jiamu
去掉modifier，整个句子redundant
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2018-10-09 11:40:24
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