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Stock levels for domestic crude oil are far lower than in past years, leaving domestic oil prices vulnerable to any hints of oil supplies being disrupted in the Middle East or to any unexpected consumer demand growth possibly prompted by colder-than-normal temperatures.
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原句句子结构：Stock levels are far lower than in past years, leaving prices vulnerable to any hints of oil supplies being disrupted in the Middle East or to any unexpected consumer demand growth possibly prompted by colder-than-normal temperatures.
原句要表达的逻辑语义：国内原油的股票水平比去年要低，这件事导致了国内原油价格易受在中东被打扰的油商的暗示的攻击；或者受始料未及的消费者的需求增长的攻击，这些需求是被更冷的温度导致的。
AD：being结构除了做主语，其他任何时候不优选；并且：这里想说的是需求被更冷的温度导致，问不是growth被温度导致；语义不合理；
C: as was前面缺少主语；引导限定性定语从句，我们也不用as;
E: In the fact of不符合表达习惯；
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当时很纠结的是BC，觉得as可以作为先行词修饰demand 可能BC可以通过语义来排除 是vulnerable to （any hints of） oil supply 还是 vulnerable to （any hints of） disruptions 不是因为supply而波动，而是因为supply的中断而波动
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2021-11-20 16:35:37
tdq1218
这里简写price vulnerable to： 一个是oil supplier disruptions, 还有一个是any unexpected growth in consumer demand. 选项A C中用句子表述转移了重点， C中was时态错
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2020-11-01 10:01:22
康村冲冲冲
整理RON: (d) and (e)→ wording is awkward in its indirectness. the sentence is supposed to say that this situation has (directly) left oil prices vulnerable to blah blah blah. however, the wording of (d) and (e) weirdly suggests that it has led to the existence of a fact, rather than to actually vulnerable oil prices.
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2020-08-31 17:21:34
康村冲冲冲
RON: the passive voice is just about the only context in which 'being' can be used with impunity
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2020-08-31 17:18:21
ybmg
B有个疑问，平行结构“vulnerable to XX or to XX” or后面是不是一定必须要有to呢？当时看到B不行平，所以就排除了。
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2020-08-13 11:11:24
511732kbdm回复ybmg
同问 这怎么解释啊
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2020-09-16 21:10:21
韭菜棒槌回复ybmg
这里平行的是supply disruptions和unexpected growth, 平行结构依然成立。比如1.I grew up both in Beijing and in Shanghai. 2. I grew up in both Bj and SH. 两个都是对的
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2020-11-05 21:18:54
与光同航
句意：美国国内原油库存水平远低于过去几年，因此，如果有中东石油供应中断的迹象，或者气温低于正常水平可能导致消费者需求意外增长，美国国内油价就会受到影响。
思路分析：1.原句的leaving domestic oil prices vulnerable to...使用正确，排除DE中的in the fact
2.being使用错误，排除A
3.C句子冗余，or的前后不对称，前边是个that从句，后边是to do不定式
4.选项B代入，or前后都是any，平行，表意清晰，that指代demand，might be使用正确
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2020-07-27 15:12:41
199482z
you can only say "X results in Y" when X is an ACTION. if X is an OBJECT, you can NEVER say that X "results" in anything.
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2020-04-09 11:31:16
1110698asve回复199482z
D项和E项错的地方并不在于X只能是个Action。如上面康村冲冲冲对于RON的引用，DE错在result in a fact 这里，造成了一种不直接。
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2021-03-10 22:27:57
Lee720
我觉得resulting in the fact that就是错在wordy吧……因果关系没错啊，前面主句也是一个'action'而非'object'啊
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2020-04-03 00:19:08
李phyphy
原句不是病句，leaving做结果状语正确，所以不要改变原句逻辑，排除d。e
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2019-10-23 01:24:26
渐秃
自己错选了D， 但是觉得解析讲wordy的理由太牵强了。其实这里应该是考察逻辑关系和modifier的用法 在此句中Leaving/resulting …都是V-ing作modifier修饰未划线部分的main clause， 而manhattan中 “whichever statement comes first in the sentence, whether modifier or main clause, is the instigating action, and whichever comes second, is the effect or result.” 即主语和修饰句，在前出现的为因，后面出现的为果。 那么DE resulting in…就完全是因果颠倒，逻辑混乱。 希望帮助到大家，加油！
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2019-04-23 10:26:40
Freya的GMAT冲鸭回复渐秃
可是Result in+结果，就是前因后果啊，没有颠倒吧
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2019-04-30 15:54:59
otter
TAKEAWAY: you can only say "X results in Y" when X is an ACTION. if X is an OBJECT, you can NEVER say that X "results" in anything.
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2019-03-10 00:28:43
夏春晖
上来先排除de,因为 SVO,doing 可以表示1 伴随关系 doing由主句主语发出 2 表示因果 前因后果，因此 DE逻辑方向相反 ，其次 我认为A中的being多余 C中as 表因果1缺少主语 2 改变逻辑意思
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2019-02-27 11:37:55
barcago回复夏春晖
为什么你的回答都不动动脑子？ 原句的意思就是前因后果，根本就没反。 你在排除什么？
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2019-09-14 14:50:37
ty0121
这个stock levels可以做leave。。。的间接主语？
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2019-02-15 11:16:32
汪二喵
找出 to and to 平行
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2018-11-29 10:04:45
雷哥的司机
我觉得单纯从wordy角度排除DE是不够的，而且在实战中这样非常危险，一定要找到DE的语法错误。 D:oil supplied being disrupted 和unexpected customer demand growth possibly prompted by...这两个结构不平行。这两部分用or连接，or在这里就是一个paralism maker，所以两部分的结构应该平行； E:resulting in the fact of domestic oil prices that xxx.注意这句话的表达，that后面只是对oil prices的修饰，所以这句话的意思就是xx导致了是石油价格，这个是不对的，原句是说导致了石油价格容易受影响。 单单用wordy时不能解决问题的
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2018-11-24 15:30:14
JoeyNgai回复雷哥的司机
D中or前面是any hints好吧，后面是any unexpected consumer demand growth，前后都是名词啊
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2018-12-24 11:23:43
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