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An international team of astronomers working at telescopes in the Canary Islands and Spain has detected at least 18 huge gas spheres estimated to have 5 to 15 times the mass of Jupiter, the solar system's largest planet.
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原句句子结构: team of astronomers has detected at least 18 huge gas spheres;
astronomers working at telescopes in the Canary Islands and Spain
gas spheres estimated to have 5 to 15 times the mass of Jupiter, the solar system's largest planet.
原句表达逻辑语义:国际宇航员(这些宇航员用望远镜在canary islands and spain 观测)队已经探测出至少有18个巨大的气体球,这些气体球被估算大概有5-15倍木星的质量。
A.语义无问题修饰无问题,先留;
B.名词所有格考察:当名词没有生命时,N of sth 是优于n’s的情况(这里juptiter没有生命的)
C. 改变句子重心,原句的谓语是has dectected,这里变成了状语修饰;
working是来修饰astronomers 的,这里变成了主干成分;
that are estimated变成了定语从句,但是修饰不产生歧义时,短语是优于句子的。
D. And 前面没有跟has detected 并列或者平行的谓语成分,导致整个句子没有谓语
E. they have estimated这里的they指代有问题;前面有两个复数名词;风险选项;
名词所有格考察:当名词没有生命时,N of sth 是优于n’s的情况(这里juptiter没有生命的)
我希望杀G成功!
Jupiter, the solar system's largest planet.确实,如果考虑到线外同位语这个点的话,就可以很快速排除B、E
汪二喵
'B jupiter不以名词形式出现,无法被同位语修饰
默默
and 不平行
ftdd
要读完全句,最后的同位语想到了OG里面fungi的一道题。很有启发。
528893liuzu回复ftdd
随手附上:Plants are more efficient than fungi at acquiring carbon, in the form of carbon dioxide, and converting it to energy-rich sugars.这里in the form of cd就是修饰carbon
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2020-10-22 20:02:21
肥肥今天学习GMAT了吗回复ftdd
Thanks♪(・ω・)ノ
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2020-12-09 14:53:26
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A astronomers (working 。。。)has detected working 非谓语做定语 (正确的方式)
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原句句子结构:An international team of… has detected… shperes estimated… 原句逻辑语义:由一群工作在卡纳里岛和西班牙的天文学家组成的国际研究队探测到了至少18个巨大的球体,据估计这些球体比太阳系中最大的行星木星还要大5-15倍。 A. 正确。 B. 以mass结尾,同位语修饰对象错误;that are at an estimated 5 to 15 times表达方式错误。 C. hat are estimated罗嗦;estimated at 5 to 15 times应该是estimated to be/have;将原句中的修饰成分与谓语进行变换,改变了原文强调的重心。 D. and has…没有并列对象, 不平行。 E. they have estimated as being 5 to 15 times表达方式错误;they指代不清楚;以mass结尾,同位语修饰对象错误。
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注意把句子读完,后面是修饰 jupiter
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考点:修饰 逻辑语义 原句的句子重心是team has detected gas spheres;working at...是修饰astronomers的成分;未划线部分后面是Jupiter的同位语结构; A 正确 B jupiter's mass中核心词在mass,the solar system's largest planet不能做mass的同位语结构;排除 C 句子的重心发生改变,语义改变;排除 D and has detected前后不平行 E 同B,排除
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