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Many environmentalists, and some economists, say that free trade encourages industry to relocate to countries with ineffective or poorly enforced antipollution laws, mostly in the developing world, and that, in order to maintain competitiveness, rich nations have joined this downward slide toward more lax attitudes about pollution.
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原句句子结构：Many environmentalists, and some economists, say that...
Say that free trade encourages industry to relocate...
and that rich nations have joined this downward slide...
原句表达逻辑语义：许多环境学家和一些经济学家说：自由贸易鼓励工厂重新选址在一些拥有无效率或者没有强制反污染的国家；大多数都在发展中国家；这些人也说：为了保持竞争力，富裕的国家已经是对污染的松懈态度。
A. 原句语义清楚，修饰正确，先留；
B. 表目的：to do 由于for doing
C. 改变原句句间关系，原句是表目的关系，这里变成因果关系。
D. 改变句子逻辑重心，原句是从句里面的主干成分：have joined，这里变成了修饰
E. 改变句子重心；wanting做主语了，谓语是is making；原句是rich nations have joined
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一个困惑大家的问题又是时态不平行问题。不要总是追求过于表面的结构平行。平行的确有一些必错的结构，比如词语和句子平行必错，抽象名词和具体名词平行必错。但是时态这种点并不是绝对的！看到平行的时候要问自己几个问题：这两个成分能不能平行？如果平行的话句意逻辑上对不对？
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2022-10-12 11:18:10
499685skw
lax，松懈（Doja Cat的Ain't Shit里need some laxative泻药）。A选项的in order to表目的，比for表达得更清楚。
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2022-10-02 13:51:17
499685skw回复499685skw
B选项 -- for表目的是错误的用法；“rich nations join in this downward slide”表达的意思成了rich nations在这个downward slide里union在一起了，改变了句子原意。 C选项 -- ”because of wanting“将原句表目的的意思转变成了表原因，错，而且because of不优。 D选项 -- 改变了句子的主句。 E选项 -- 改变了句子原意。
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2022-10-07 22:41:27
彦均小孩
在A、B之间犹豫，错选B 记忆点：表示目的时，to do优于for doing
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2022-09-01 16:38:28
Audreyrey
join in 和join 的区别： join in 代表着： 富有国家(手牵手，共同，一起）。而这里本应该是说，富有国家，individually join
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2020-12-28 21:10:42
Yosemeen
搬运Ron的回复 here are a couple of problems with choice b: - 'for maintaining competitiveness' is bad idiomatic usage: it's an incorrect way to express intent or purpose. (the construction in choice a is surprisingly wordy - in order to could be replaced with just to, with no loss of meaning - and might not make it onto the real exam.) - 'rich nations join in this downward slide': fatal change in meaning. this wording implies that the rich nations are colluding with each other, metaphorically holding hands, deciding together to become more lax about pollution. (choice a expresses the correct meaning, which is that the slide is happening and that rich nations are individually joining it.) - the simple present tense join implies that there is some sort of timeless truth about the statement being made. that's the wrong meaning: the sentence is meant to say that the rich nations have begun to do this as a result of current trends. if you don't understand the difference, consider the following analogous examples: private universities have admitted more females than males --> meaning: this is an ongoing or cumulative trend, continuing into the present from some designated starting point private universities admit more females than males --> meaning: this is a fundamental truth about the way private universities operate
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2020-12-15 15:43:42
小良冠二郎
to do表目的，for表原因。現實生活中的英語真的不太嚴謹～
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2020-09-28 17:10:00
冲呀750！回复小良冠二郎
啊，听起来没哈子区别呀(ㄒoㄒ)
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2022-09-23 20:43:52
175029gvqit
https://www.manhattanprep.com/gmat/forums/post54620.html#p54620
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2020-09-17 13:36:44
Souffle
join加入一个群体 join in参与（活动）
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2020-04-22 20:04:47
；svkdnvl
想问一下join的时态为什么是完成时呢，感觉应该跟之前的对应，是现在时态。。。也没有time maker
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2019-12-23 23:33:09
Ahhhhhow
for doing不表示目的，不表示目的，不表示目的！
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2019-08-26 16:31:16
AA要考700回复Ahhhhhow
for doing 表示目的的吧，只是在表示目的时 to do 优于 for doing ，可以视作相对语法错误。
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2020-02-23 21:47:00
Kath1230
这个词已经在B上面错了几次了，记住 for不表示目的，表原因。。。
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2019-01-21 22:03:32
Kath1230回复Kath1230
wanting to 肯定是错了 排除BCD A that, 【in order to】 maintain competitiveness, rich nations 【have joined】 this downward slide toward more lax attitudes about pollution in order to表示目的，因为要maintain，所以rich nations已经joined了。。 B that, for maintaining competitiveness, rich nations join in this downward slide toward more lax attitudes about pollution, for doing不表示目的，表示原因
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2019-02-18 14:23:02
AdamWho
In order to...在此处作插入语
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2018-08-30 13:55:06
pbshill
that并列，前一个是一般时，后一个是完成时，不一致啊，选A有问题
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2018-08-20 17:36:55
AdamWho回复pbshill
两个句子that并列，并且结构都是that+主谓宾,就是一个合格的并列了；时态不一致完全是根据句意的要求，对平行没有影响
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2018-08-30 13:51:51
GMAT是个渣回复pbshill
一般判断完成时需要时间状语，但是这里的A可以根据语义来判断，因为and之前的发展中国家是一般情况，用一般现在时即可；但是and之后的发达国家是已经完成了这个行为用现在完成时（也可以解释，至少不算错）。
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2018-11-12 16:15:17
默默
从句的that最好不要省
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2018-04-11 16:29:02
默默
CDE表示都很复杂
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2018-04-02 04:23:12
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