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Scientists believe that unlike the males of most species of moth, the male whistling moths of Nambung, Australia, call female moths to them by the use of acoustical signals, but not olfactory ones, and they attract their mates during the day, rather than at night.

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当前版本由 hoho 更新于2017-03-10 11:11:39 感谢由 hoho 对此题目的解答所做出的贡献。
原句句子结构:Scientists believe that…, … male moths… call female moths… using…, rather than…, and attract their mates...
原句逻辑语义:科学家相信,不像大多数物种的雄蛾,在Nambung澳大利亚,口哨雌蛾吸引雌性通过声学信号的使用,而不是嗅觉的,而且他们在白天吸引伴侣而不是在晚上。
A.They指代模糊,容易引起语义歧义。
B.And二边无法平行,一边是动词call,一边是分词attracting。
C.By using和by attracting平行,导致语义错误,attract应该与call对称。
D.正确。
E.And二边无法平行,一边是动词call,一边是分词attracting。

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    LiShixian

    不是只有'' , V-ing “才是副词可以修饰主句的动词吗,为什么没有逗号这里的using也可以修饰call,没有逗号的ing不应该修饰n.吗
    1 0 回复 2019-10-27 10:19:27
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    Commsnd

    "call females( by )using signals and attract mates during the day" 为啥中间的by可以省略掉?
    1 0 回复 2019-03-06 06:54:42
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      Cherry908回复Commsnd

      同问

      0 0 回复 2019-03-09 20:59:04

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      LUCY_0813回复 Cherry908

      不是by省略了 是doing and doing做修饰 你把句子理顺了就能看懂了

      0 2 回复 2019-09-18 13:34:24

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    默默

    那句子看完,了解句子意思
    0 0 回复 2018-04-04 13:13:09
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      默默回复默默

      attract与call 并列

      0 0 回复 2018-04-12 03:02:23

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    桐桐

    /but/ implies a contrast. if X but not Y has a contrast, then that would imply that X and Y usually go together. E.g., At the event, I saw Jake but not his wife. --> This sentence only makes sense if I would normally expect to see Jake's wife by his side. In this sentence, there's no reason to expect that acoustic signals would be accompanied by olfactory ones.
    0 0 回复 2018-04-01 23:02:08
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    桐桐

    /instead of/ is generally restricted to nouns. /rather than/ can be used for essentially any part of speech at all. they moved stiffly rather than gracefully (adverbs) they moved to the left rather than to the right (prepositional phrases) the car was red rather than blue (adjectives)
    0 0 回复 2018-04-01 22:59:45
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    桐桐

    Another perspective to tackle this SC: SUBJECT+VERB....+ by verbing.... indicates that the subject ITSELF is doing the action in "by verbing"; however, "by the noun of" (here by the use of....) indicates the subject is not invovled in this action, this action is done by somebody that does not appear in sentence. Since MWM itself IS USING...... eliminate A,B
    0 0 回复 2018-04-01 22:57:33
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      ( ¨̮ )回复桐桐

      THX

      0 0 回复 2018-07-26 14:07:02

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      麦兜皮皮熊回复桐桐

      a refreshing view, pretty good.

      0 0 回复 2019-09-04 11:16:39

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    桐桐

    this question can be queite easy if you use *parallelsim*. You see, MWM call.......and attract........ two parallel verbs, therefore, eliminate B,C,E; Choice A is bad——of course, its parallel structure is inferior to D's——since it indicates that "scientists" ATTRACT mates...nonsensical!!
    1 0 回复 2018-04-01 22:56:45
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    桐桐

    RON的解释: by using 和 using either is fine
    2 0 回复 2018-04-01 22:55:57
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    必胜小番茄

    提问 d中的using……不会比认为是修饰them的吗 这样就有歧义了
    0 0 回复 2017-10-31 14:38:32
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    松软的小豆包

    Scientists believe that unlike the males of most species of moth, the male whistling moths of Nambung, Australia, call female moths to them using acoustical signals, rather than olfactory ones, and attract their mates during the day, rather than at night.
    
    Scientists believe that the male whistling moths call female moth to... and attract their mate...在该结构中attact和call是and的前后平行结构;在and的前半句中,call female moths to them using acoustical signals,rather than olfactory ones,首先选择rather than是根据后半句出现的rather than 选择,其次olfactory ones 和 acoustical signals平行,且ones 指代signals。
    0 0 回复 2017-06-01 15:04:04
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    夕阳下的春日部

    考点:平行

    1、首先要判断“call female moths”/"use signals"/"attract mates"之间的关系。

    他们的关系应该是:call females( by )using signals and attract mates during the day.

    2、先看A/B/C

    A选项,they指代不明。

    B选项and attracting既不能与call平行,也不跟use平行。

    C选项。attract不能修饰call

    2、再看D/E。

    D正确using分词作状语修饰call

    E选项,attract不能修饰call.


    0 0 回复 2015-11-25 17:56:10
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