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A team of scientists has recently provided evidence of Earth being bombarded daily with as many as 40,000 small comets, vaporizing in the upper atmosphere to fall to Earth as rain.
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原句句子结构：A team… has provided evidence that Earth is bombarded… with… comets that vaporize… and fall…
原句逻辑语义：一组科学家最近提供了证据，地球被每日多达40000个小彗星撞击轰炸，蒸发在高层大气中，然后形成雨水落入地球。
A. evidence of being表达错误，evidence后面应该跟同位语从句解释evidence的内容；现在分词vaporizing在句尾有作伴随状语修饰歧义。
B. evidence of being表达错误，evidence后面应该跟同位语从句解释evidence的内容；现在分词vaporizing在句尾有作伴随状语修饰歧义；and that没有并列对象。
C. as much or more than搭配错误；分词结构vaporizing修饰对象不清楚。
D. daily位置改变使其修饰对象错误；as much or more than搭配错误；and that在语法上与前面的that并列，不符合逻辑，应该去掉that，与vaporize作并列从句谓语。
E. 正确。
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D中，最后的两个that只需要一个就可以，因为主语相同，在fall前面加that容易造成歧义，以为是跟最前面的第一个that平行。
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2020-01-11 23:14:21
不灭的凤凰
A选项 错误1：being多余 错误2: 逗号v-doing表示结果或伴随，意思是科学家提供证据这一行为蒸发了……逻辑意思不合理
B选项 错误1，2同A，错误3：and后面that没有并列对象
C选项 错误1：as much or more than 修饰不可数名词，错误2同A，错误3：and后面的fall与provided并列逻辑意思不合理
D选项 错误1：daily earth表示每天的地球，意思是每天的地球都被撞，意思不合理。错误2：as much or more than 修饰不可数名词。
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2018-10-26 18:30:25
发呆的夜之亡魂
D as much as应该用as many as，然后daily earth的daily修饰错误，明明是日常被轰而不是日常地球
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2018-08-12 22:16:09
默默
Ｅ结尾中两个动词同时修饰先行词
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2018-04-04 15:25:37
默默回复默默
as as前后平行
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2018-04-12 03:12:59
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of being表达不简洁
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2018-04-12 03:16:15
默默回复默默
as much as , as many as
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2018-04-12 03:21:48
Noleo
comet是可数的，所以不应该用much，而应用many 所以CD错，E对
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2017-12-18 16:35:49
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考点：修饰 比较 平行
evidence后面可以接同位语从句，无条件优选结构； as much as或as many as中两个as要同时出现；划线部分后面是fall 前有and，需前后平行
A evidence of不如同位语从句；
B 同A； Earth's being 表达wordy；
C as much中少了一个as;
D 同C
E 正确
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