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Gone are the sharp edges and jutting planes of styles from former eras; instead, designers of everything from cars to computer monitors have adopted a cornerless style of smooth surfaces and curves that is more ergonomic, conforming to the shape of the body rather than flaunting shape for its own sake.

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当前版本由 hoho 更新于2017-03-10 11:15:53 感谢由 hoho 对此题目的解答所做出的贡献。

原句句子结构:Gone are …; instead, designers… have adopted a style… that is …, conforming to…rather than flaunting…
原句逻辑语义:锋利的边缘风格和突出的设计风格时代已经一去不复返了;相反,任何领域(从汽车设计到电脑设计)的设计师们都选择了流畅光滑无角的设计风格,认为这种设计风格更加符合人体工学,比起之前的风格更加适合身体的形状。

A. 正确。
B. 用过去分词conformed表示被动,不符合逻辑意思;and后面的to shape...与to the shape of the body并列对象错误。
C. more位置改变,改变了原句意思;rather than连接对象不对称。
D. more位置改变,改变了原句意思;and后面的to shape...与to the shape of the body并列对象错误。
E. more位置改变,改变了原句意思;more…than错误搭配改变了原句意思。


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    我希望杀G成功!

    方便uu们看,翻译一下下面同学对ron神解释的搬运:
    1)第一个split是ergonomic前有无more,就要弄清原句的意思:the new design is more ergonomic than the old design,如果more往后放的话,那就是he old design simply wasn't ergonomic (and that the new design, by contrast, is)显然这是不对的
    2)比较问题:X rather than Y';X and not Y
    A:conforming... rather than flaunting
    B:to the body's shape and not to flaunting shape
    C:平行搭配就不对
    D:more...rather than也不匹配
    E:more to the shape... than flaunting
    0 0 回复 2021-11-28 16:24:58
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    今天正确率高了吗!

    家人们!!flaunt是个动词v.啊!(这个我的确不知道才选的E我以为是个adj),且当时还觉得more得有than……
    A中 conforming to (the shape of the body )rather than flaunting (shape for its own sake.)应该是两个v的平行。这的语义是conform to A 而不是B【所以只conform了一个】
    但其实conforming这个是由designer发出来的,前面有个逗号!!所以有无than不影响了!
    E、conforming more to (the shape of the body) than flaunting shape——这里的语义是,conform 更多的是A【那就是conform了两个,只是A比B多,所以语义会改变】
    1 0 回复 2021-10-23 10:28:10
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    209197gy

    通过平行判断
    注意固定搭配
    0 0 回复 2021-10-11 23:37:37
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    快刀斩G

    搬运Ron神的解释
    
    irst, examine the split between 'more ergonomic' and just 'ergonomic'. in this case, we must preserve the meaning of the original statement: the new design is more ergonomic than the old design. if we change this to just 'ergonomic', we're attaching an implication that the old design simply wasn't ergonomic (and that the new design, by contrast, is) - an unacceptable implication. that gets rid of answer choices c, d, and e right there.
    
    another item to examine is parallelism. in this case, in the construction 'X rather than Y' (or its analogues, 'X and not Y' and 'more X than Y'), items X and Y must be parallel.
    choice a: conforming... rather than flaunting... <-- good parallelism!
    choice b: to the body's shape and not to flaunting shape <-- logically nonparallel and also awkward
    choice c: can't use 'more' together with 'and not to' (these are exclusive constructions, sort of like 'both' and 'as well as': if you use one, then you can't use the other), so we don't need to consider the parallelism in the first place.
    choice d: can't use 'more' together with 'rather than'; also, bad parallelism between to the body's shape and shape flaunted...
    choice e: more to the shape... than flaunting... <-- nonparallel
    
    in fact, the winning choice (a) is the ONLY choice that properly compares 'conforming' and 'flaunting' in parallel. all of the other constructions also change the meaning of the sentence via their alterations of the words.
    1 0 回复 2021-04-28 14:25:29
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      170523o回复快刀斩G

      请问RON的这些解析是在哪里可以看到,楼主是从RON视频里找到的吗?感谢!

      0 0 回复 2021-06-25 11:38:32

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      豆果的杏力蛋回复快刀斩G

      https://www.manhattanprep.com/gmat/forums/post7479.html#p7479

      0 0 回复 2021-09-18 13:32:33

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    700冲冲冲!

    做的时候以为是三项平行,怎么看都理不清楚,一看翻译才发现,原来是后面的修饰前面的。“昔日风格的尖锐棱角和突出的平面都已不复存在;相反,从汽车到电脑显示器的所有设计师都采用了光滑表面和曲线的无角风格,这更符合人体工程学,符合身体的形状,而不是为了炫耀形状本身。”
    0 0 回复 2021-04-14 10:32:22
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    327046ntjb

    这解析了个啥
    0 0 回复 2021-01-17 18:11:05
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    Litchichi

    ... a cornerless style ... that is more ergonomic, conforming to the shape ... rather than flaunting shape ... 原句中 that = style, 而固定搭配 conform to 后面跟 shape,但是这里存在两种 shape,一个是 shape of body,另一个是 flaunting shape,原句句意是想表达 “符合 body 的形状”,因此采用 rather than,表明 conforming the shape of body rather than flaunting shape = 符合A形态而不符合B形态.
    0 0 回复 2020-12-16 15:43:17
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    Horacejin

    conforming修饰的是designers 这句是胡扯
    2 0 回复 2019-04-04 13:42:26
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      fuckgmat回复Horacejin

      肯定是修饰的是style

      0 0 回复 2019-12-16 16:07:41

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      王愚人回复Horacejin

      很显然修饰designers,conform遵照,flaunt炫耀,你觉得style能有遵照和炫耀的想法?而且从结构上分析这也是修饰主句的。

      0 0 回复 2021-04-09 14:47:23

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    Ambulance.

    我觉得A选项中more ergonomic修饰的是style,rather than flaunting和conforming修士的是designer,因此不是搭配错误。D选项中的more to the body's shape rather than shape flaunted修饰的都是conforming,因此是搭配错误。
    0 0 回复 2019-01-07 22:03:51
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    Ksphyhy

    RON:can't use 'more' together with 'and not to' (these are exclusive constructions, sort of like 'both' and 'as well as': if you use one, then you can't use the other)
    0 0 回复 2019-01-04 22:24:48
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    不灭的凤凰

    B选项:错误:conforming原句是由designer发出的,改为被动后就近修饰了that,that跳跃修饰的style,逻辑错误
    C选项:错误1:more位置改变原句意思;错误2:同B错误
    D选项:错误1:同C错误1
    E选项:错误同C错误1

    0 0 回复 2018-10-26 22:43:04
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    王姿尹児

    conform和flaunt都是动词,conforming和flaunting平行。
    0 0 回复 2018-08-05 19:01:35
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    默默

    DE more的修饰为之改变,句子中心改变
    0 0 回复 2018-04-25 02:45:52
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    nmbdy

    first, examine the split between 'more ergonomic' and just 'ergonomic'. in this case, we must preserve the meaning of the original statement: the new design is more ergonomic than the old design. if we change this to just 'ergonomic', we're attaching an implication that the old design simply wasn't ergonomic (and that the new design, by contrast, is) - an unacceptable implication. that gets rid of answer choices c, d, and e right there. 
    
    another item to examine is parallelism. in this case, in the construction 'X rather than Y' (or its analogues, 'X and not Y' and 'more X than Y'), items X and Y must be parallel. 
    choice a: conforming... rather than flaunting... <-- good parallelism! 
    choice b: to the body's shape and not to flaunting shape <-- logically nonparallel and also awkward 
    choice c: can't use 'more' together with 'and not to' (these are exclusive constructions, sort of like 'both' and 'as well as': if you use one, then you can't use the other), so we don't need to consider the parallelism in the first place. 
    choice d: can't use 'more' together with 'rather than'; also, bad parallelism between to the body's shape and shape flaunted... 
    choice e: more to the shape... than flaunting... <-- nonparallel 
    
    in fact, the winning choice (a) is the ONLY choice that properly compares 'conforming' and 'flaunting' in parallel. all of the other constructions also change the meaning of the sentence via their alterations of the words.
    0 0 回复 2017-11-14 09:09:40
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      Thenewmotivation回复nmbdy

      conforming不与flaunting平行,不要误导。这里是conforming to A rather than B. 注意是the shape of body和flaunting shape平行。conforming只是对前面的design进行的补充,我真是服了,这水平就别长篇大论了。

      0 0 回复 2018-01-20 00:03:44

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      Thenewmotivation回复nmbdy

      哈哈哈打自己脸了,与the shape if body平行应该是the flaunty shape...这个还真是conforming和flaunting平行修饰前面的style

      0 0 回复 2018-01-20 00:20:59

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      干死gmat回复nmbdy

      conforming修饰designers

      0 0 回复 2018-07-23 11:49:34

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    linemily

    conforming和fluctuating并列平行
    0 0 回复 2017-09-25 10:27:24
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      Thenewmotivation回复linemily

      conforming不与flaunting平行,不要误导。这里是conforming to A rather than B. 注意是the shape of body和flaunting shape平行。conforming只是对前面的design进行的补充。

      0 0 回复 2018-01-20 00:05:07

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      Thenewmotivation回复linemily

      哈哈哈打自己脸了,与the shape if body平行应该是the flaunty shape...这个还真是conforming和flaunting平行修饰前面的style...

      0 0 回复 2018-01-20 00:21:23

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