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Whereas heat transferred between the ocean and the atmosphere occurs more rapidly when the ocean is warmer than the air, it is slow when the ocean is colder.
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原句句子结构：The transfer of heat is slow when… and (is) more rapid when….
原句逻辑语义：然而，热量转移在海洋和大气之间发生更快，在海洋温度高于空气温度时，当海洋温度下降，它（无指代对象）也在慢慢放缓。
A. It没有符合逻辑的指代对象，因为前句的transfer是动词，而it应指代名词，才能作is slow的主语。
B. slow process与heat比较，比较对象不对等
C.正确。
D. transfer可作名词，不需要分词形式transferring；it指代对象不清。
E. them指代不清；Unlike后面接的是transfer，但是没有对等的可比较对象。
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A选项后面的it指代不到transferred，因为这是一个动词，错。B选项加了一层原句中没有的对比关系，不优；且对比物对比不成；D选项，it指代模糊；E选项，unlike一般放句首，而且unlike后面的名词跟主句主语heat也不可比。
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2022-10-04 22:20:08
Lllllllla
B明显是比较错误，the process和heat 而ADE的错误在于它表达的是heat occur slowly，这是错误的，应该是transfer occur slowly
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2019-11-07 15:35:46
847716opn
B 中心词是slow process和heat，比较对象错误 C and前后连接的句子平行对称，第二个句子由于主谓与前句相同，因此可以省略谓语
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2019-10-05 16:20:52
ziyuanguo
A是heat occurs 应该是transfer occurs
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2019-01-31 14:06:37
AUCHUI
choice a: - if you take out modifiers, the basic structure of this sentence is 'whereas heat ... occurs more rapidly when blah blah blah, it is slow when blah blah blah.' that's unacceptable - it's not the heat that 'happens' (it's the transfer). remember that the gmat is very exacting about wording that means what it's supposed to mean. choice d: - 'transferring... occurs' is bad idiom (you can't use occurs with the gerund form) - the 'it' toward the end of this choice is technically ambiguous (could theoretically refer to 'transferring' or 'ocean', or perhaps even 'air') choice e: - awkward phrasing in general (if you're a native speaker, you should definitely notice this) - same problem as in choice a: the sentence says that the heat 'occurs slowly', which doesn't make any sense
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2018-11-05 18:33:07
默默
Ａ逻辑不对，Ｂ unlike 后东西太多
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2018-05-09 02:55:16
默默回复默默
D指代歧义，Ｅ太啰嗦
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2018-05-09 03:02:27
jfghcf
c项一来就是主语很清晰
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2018-01-20 10:33:45
Lily730
A it 没有符合逻辑的指代对象，因为前句的transfer是动词，而it 应该指代名词，才能做is slow的主语 B slow process 与heat比较，比较对象不对等 D transfer可做名词，不需要分词形式transferring; it指代不清 E them指代不清，unlike后面接的是 transfer但是前文没有对等的可比较对象
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2017-08-30 13:52:49
Celina
考点一，指代不明。排除A和D，因为句中It指代对象不明确。 考点二，并列结构（like的用法）。排除B和E，B中前后对比对象性质不一致，the slow process(中心词）of heat transfer 与后文中heat tranfers 不对称；E中heat与the more rapid transfer 同样不一致。 C的句子结构简化如下，the transfer...is slow when....and more rapid when。
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