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In a blow to those who still harbored the illusion that E-mail exchanges are private, a watchdog group recently uncovered a trick for enabling an interloper to rig an E-mail message so that this person will be privy to any comments that a recipient had added as the message is forwarded to others or sent back and forth.
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a trick of doing something 固定搭配，排除AB
选项C who still were应该被省去;so that从句应该用将来时will be privy to
选项D 正确
选项E Had been private使用过去完成时态不正确；will enable 错误
189450ayfj
看了半天也没看到解析说的a trick of doing something在哪里
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2022-12-18 19:12:51
189450ayfj回复 189450ayfj
又做错了。。。
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2022-12-21 01:12:03
pjystudy回复189450ayfj
可能它是为了证明没有a trick for doing的用法
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2023-03-04 12:40:08
499685skw
GMAT中一个代名词后面不用跟另一个代名词，所以those who的搭配是错的，排除掉ABC。对比DE，对于一般常识的东西，用一般现在时，所以D选项的“are private”要比E选项的”had been private“更好，另外是D选项的“a trick that enables”和E选项的“a trick that will enable”，既然group已经uncovered了trick，那么trick就不会“将要”做什么了，只需要比uncovered提高一个时态就可以--用一般现在时即可。所以D是对的。
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2022-10-07 13:59:50
贾思敏
1、a trick of doing something 做某事的技巧-固定搭配 2、those已经是一个代词，不需要后面跟另一个代词who了（也就是those did/doing才是对的，不能是those who did sth.） ABC选项都有who排除 选项D：正确。harboring修饰those，ok。 选项E：①Had been private使用过去完成时态不正确，第一与后面的一般过去covered没有构成先后的时间逻辑顺序，用had been done过去完成时完全不合理②will enable 错误，因为这个enable是修饰这个trick的，是在客观事实上，这个trick能够怎么怎么样（表示trick的客观功能属性），而不是这个trick将会怎么样，时态用法错误
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2021-10-15 17:33:24
168166gsbq回复 贾思敏
those who 也不是必错。
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2021-12-07 14:16:40
304247yrdh
those不能单独做主语，除非前面提到过those指代的名词
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2021-07-17 15:32:38
小波rsma
有had done时必须有个其他的过去时，不能单独出现
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2021-01-08 13:23:25
254431gpl
请问those who什么情况下可用呢？
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2020-12-26 14:48:28
165105ld
those已经是一个代词，不需要另一个代词who了，排除ABC
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2020-11-10 04:33:53
Oaken_Sheldon
1) Pronouns - The opening of the sentence states that "In a blow to THOSE…."; here, the word "those" is a pronoun. In the answers, we see that some have an extra pronoun and some don't. Since we already have a pronoun, we do NOT need another pronoun immediately next to it. That extra pronoun is redundant (and unnecessary). Eliminate A, B and C. 2) Verbs - Between D and E, we have the verbs "enables" (present tense) and "will enable" (future tense). Since the watchdog group "recently uncovered the trick", we're dealing with something that's happening in the immediate present. The verb "enables" is required here. Eliminate E.
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2020-10-11 23:08:25
三爪Szandra
are private: reference to people who believed that this was generally true will be privy: make sense because they won’t see the comments until the person adds them would add:would在这个句子中既不是will的过去时,也不能表示不真实的假设情况,因此错误
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2020-07-13 09:43:14
小火火火箭
这题完全考时态，A选项still harbored 和后面的are时态明显不对应，后面的had added和非划线部分的is不对应，排除； B选项had still...和后面的are不对应，后面的this person was privy的was时态也有问题，过去时说明动作发生在过去，现在不再privy了，语意明显不对； C选项were harboring和are不对应，过去进行时强调过去的某个时间段的动作一直在进行，后面的would add也不对，would应该是will； E选项still harboring和后面的过去完成时不对应，was privy也不对
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2019-10-12 19:28:48
小火火火箭
这题完全考时态，A选项still harbored 和后面的are时态明显不对应，后面的had added和非划线部分的is不对应，排除；
B选项had still...和后面的are不对应，后面的this person was privy的was时态也有问题，过去时说明动作发生在过去，现在不再privy了，语意明显不对；
C选项were harboring和are不对应，过去进行时强调过去的某个时间段的动作一直在进行，后面的would add也不对，would应该是will；
E选项still harboring和后面的过去完成时不对应，was privy也不对
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2019-10-12 19:28:29
dddl
这题怎么会是600分以下，，，
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2019-09-16 13:14:06
Cherish-xing回复dddl
感觉是分数越高的题目，才越会考到平行之类的高级语言表达，只考时态固定搭配之类在native中属于基础语言范畴。。。？
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2020-02-20 02:12:12
铭铭能上700分
这道题从时态做会更快点哎~
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2019-07-31 18:51:57
老嘴啊
would与might是不同的，would表示在……条件下一定会做某事，而might表示在……条件下有可能做，也有可能不做
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2019-04-16 12:48:55
Horacejin
加who前面得是个完整的句子结构，应该是。
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2019-04-04 14:23:59
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