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In the United States, while the number of foreign-born residents and their children is higher than ever, the percentage of the population they represent is not; in 1910 this group made up 35 percent of the population when compared to 20 percent in 2000.
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A中compare的动作发出者是主语group错
B中as compared to后是年份，将人口的35%和2000年比较，错；it指代不清
C comparing为主动形式，用法错；it指代不清
D 将2000和this group比较，错
E对
技巧：when或者as后面有动词的ed形式，都是状语从句的省略形式，补充出主语就知道谁跟谁比较了。
小良冠二郎
對於A選，when從句其實是省略了主語，而這個主語就是前面主句的主語This group。所以This group和20%比較是不okay的。E選項35%和20%比較，correct。
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2021-02-14 14:45:54
小良冠二郎
只有中國的老師才教compare to和compare with的區別。
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2021-02-14 14:37:33
194031zycq回复小良冠二郎
？那你别用中国网页
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2021-02-23 03:57:42
162403pksk回复小良冠二郎
compare to和compare with 在GMAT考试中不论语义还是用法是不做区分的，所以找错误千万别从这里找
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2021-05-27 15:38:19
732126rpai回复 小良冠二郎
那你TMD一个湾湾会不会看不懂我在国粹你？FW
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2022-10-25 14:59:26
鸡鸡沙西米
A. population when compared to 20 percent in 2000 the "when" here kills this answer choice. remember that you have to read very literally. if you read the "when" literally, then you'd be saying that the 1910 immigrant group made up 35% of the population WHEN THEY WERE COMPARED to 20 percent (of something we haven't even specified) in 2000. of course, this makes no literal sense whatsoever. B. population as compared to 2000, when it was 20 percent nothing to which the pronoun "it" can refer. C. population, comparing it with 20 percent in 2000 this is a COMMA + -ING modifier. these modifiers modify the ENTIRE PRECEDING CLAUSE, and the verbal (in this case "comparing") is attributed to the subject of the preceding clause. therefore, according to this answer choice, "this group" actually compared "it" (we're not sure what "it" is) with 20 percent - and did so in 2000 (even though they were in 1910). D. population, unlike 2000, with 20 percent "unlike 2000" suggests that there is a direct comparison between "this group" (the subject of the preceding sentence) and the year 2000. that's a nonparallel comparison. also, the preposition "with" isn't parallel to anything. E. population, compared with 20 percent in 2000 valid comparison between two percentages. note the parallel constructions "in 1910" and "in 2000", and also note the lack of the fatal alterations of meaning that exist in (a) and (c).
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2020-10-20 12:24:56
卢12345
A population when compared to 20 percent in 2000 语义问题，应该不是当被比较是，人口是··· B population as compared to 2000, when it was 20 percent it全指代，不对 C population, comparing it with 20 percent in 2000 compare的动作发出者是谁？ D population, unlike 2000, with 20 percent 不是2000与人口比 E population, compared with 20 percent in 2000
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2020-08-16 21:55:27
小火火火箭
澄清网友解析的一个错误，GMAT一般不考compare to和compare with的不同；A选项错误的原因是语意不对：the 1910 immigrant group made up 35% of the population WHEN THEY WERE COMPARED to 20 percent (of something we haven't even specified) in 2000.意思就是当他们和20%比较时才占总人口的35%
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2019-10-11 19:00:07
lucky7
这里E选项的compared with为什么是正确的，compared with比较的主体是20 percent和前面的this group，这种比较为什么是对的？compared with不是像unlike一样吗 后面加的短语只能和主语对比？
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2019-03-21 19:03:55
peterbearpan回复lucky7
compared with修饰的是population -ed分词只能修饰最近的名词
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2019-04-10 21:01:50
jassicacanidy
A，when，代表了只有在对比2000年的20%时1910年的才是35%，语义错误
B，在对比35%和2000年，对象错误
C，it指代不明
D，同B
E，对的
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2018-12-13 13:21:01
Shae
E 中的compared不应该就近修饰吗？或者说可能会引起歧义
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2018-08-11 16:47:21
嘉仓佑措回复Shae
compared 是前面只要有可比的东西，有一个算一个，不一定就近修饰
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2019-03-11 15:52:30
yl16
No functional difference between "compared to" and "compared with"
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2017-08-21 12:59:46
abccccccc
比较 compare to 表示比作，compare with表示比较； A compare to用法错误 B 同A C comparing修饰made，逻辑主语是this group，表达不如compared with简洁； D unlike 2000比较错误 E 正确
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2015-11-03 22:02:04
168166gsbq回复abccccccc
比较 to 和 with一点用没有
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2021-12-09 10:17:20
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